Like Father Like Son

[The Toy Soldier]

Chorus
Hey dad how about we go fishing today
hey dad how about we go out and play
you know it'll just like the old days
even though im older it can remain the same

Ever since I was born he always was there for me
even when it seemed like he just could not be
ill tell you a story lyrically presented
I say this from my heart aint no other way to say it
whenever i would cry you said it would be fine
you were the only one who could understand my mind
momma was there but she just could not find
what it was that was wrong why i just could not unwind
now i got this all lined ready to rhyme
to story of the times that i spent so fine
like when i was 8 and we both went to mexico
you knew you were riskin alot but you still said so
even if it meant not having a good life you didn't say no
now all these people are soon to know the stories i Kept low
but iwant to take this moment to say my thanks to you
you were always the best dad and now I know its true

Chrous

Remember that time dad we just sat on the couch
talknig about smallville seasons and just slouch
even if we disagreed you didn't go on grouch
instead you did the opposite and tried to understand my position
it felt like you were the first to sign my opinions petition
went ifelt liek i ran out of fuel you gave me my ignition
when i was in a tourney you helped me make it look like an exhibition
when i was afraid you stripped me of all of my inhibitions
and no matter the words you just always were there to listen
I thank god veryday that I got you as a father
Im glad you stuck with me and helped out my mother
no matter the differences from the divorce
cheering me up was always the point in course
in the name of the father the son and the holy ghost
Dad your one of the best fathers among the most
i aint afraid to say it shit ill boast
god thank you for this father hes my life's greatest host

Chorus

....I Love you dad.


...I'm going through a tough time with my concince and alot of stuff about religion and lfie and stuff so I relaize some of the stuff I love the most and ima write aobut it, first topic wa smy dad.

[Solace]

dude i cant read it now but i will later.


and i think its really nice how your writing about your dad

[The Toy Soldier]

dude i cant read it now but i will later.


and i think its really nice how your writing about your dad

how can u not read it? time?

[Solace]

Yeah time, im reading now, so ill edit when done...

EDIT: it wasnt lyrically and witty and shit, but it was good. Your parents are divorced? So are mine. This was a pretty good piece, nothing amazing. I think this was my favourite line:

instead you did the opposite and tried to understand my position
it felt like you were the first to sign my opinions petition

I dunno why, the way its said, first to sign my opinion petition. i like that Anyways, peace.

PS. I imagine the chorus in my head as like a little kid talking. I dunno i just thought i might let you know that.

[The Toy Soldier]

Yeah time, im reading now, so ill edit when done...

EDIT: it wasnt lyrically and witty and shit, but it was good. Your parents are divorced? So are mine. This was a pretty good piece, nothing amazing. I think this was my favourite line:

instead you did the opposite and tried to understand my position
it felt like you were the first to sign my opinions petition

I dunno why, the way its said, first to sign my opinion petition. i like that Anyways, peace.

PS. I imagine the chorus in my head as like a little kid talking. I dunno i just thought i might let you know that.

ok thnx man love tha critiques man