Verse on Life

[Emadyville]

Ok I'm getting on a song about life, I was told to just write about anything about life, so this is the approach I took. Need feedback though, trying to see if this works.

Life is so easy, no problems it’s simple,
You ask a question and I give you the info,
I never was turned down, my reps undeniable,
Every verse you tell me to write is just viable,
Life’s a game of tug of war, go ahead try-n-pull,
And you’ll land on your ass as I sit and smile-full,
Because life comes easy, there’s no ups and downs,
I do everything right, in fact I even wear the crown,
I was the best at everything growing up in my town,
Anyone who tested me also tasted the ground,
Just like when I hit the stage and I feel the crowd,
But maybe life’s a lie, what does this verse mean now?

[Steve Spag]

Dope verse man!
Love the meaning to it, and the last line is really sick.

Good shit man, keep it up!

[Emadyville]

Dope verse man!
Love the meaning to it, and the last line is really sick.

Good shit man, keep it up!

Thanks man always appreciate your feed.