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Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 3rd, '08, 05:08

I'm gonna hit tha Spliff Now cuz I Missed Out Before but I'm Reborn producing These Storms
Lightning Strikes I'm Writing Like I just started Sniping Mics Scope Free as I Smoke Weed

to calm Many Thoughts Any Drop I Produce is Tha Truth Ya Used to Hate Rain
however unlike u I don't Play Games or Say Names so u can just Fake Fame

I don't need to be Famous I could Aim This gun at my Fucking Dome
look who's Touching Chrome and Crushing Bones with a Disgusting Tone

u can't Listen To but I'm not Missing U that's why I've been Gone So Long
steady going Gonzo On these Songs So Strong moving On No Lawns

I'm Stealthy Guy who can't Sell Weak Lies so he spits flames like it's something Hell Devised
thru tha Teli's Eyes u see a Fascist World mother earth is tha Baddest Girl and now this Addict Hurls

steading Spewing I'm Puking my Written Rhymes so at any Given Time I could Lose It
I'm a white rapper with no to Do List it's Stupid is it my fault I love this rap Music
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Oct 4th, '08, 18:54, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Why Do I Bother?

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 4th, '08, 02:21

i wasnt feeling it fully, what i did like however was
so he spits flames like it's something Hell Devised
cuz it made sense to me
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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