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World Beware

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 8th, '08, 02:58

World beware, I'm certainly here for eternity with these words that i share
But will you return to me the courtesy to affirm it you care
cuz is it worth to see the birth of me and a determined career?

well I have heard to be alert and prepared as my term's in the air
unsure i'm free, i'm a person who's scared
cuz internally things are worse - my nightmare's now surfacing I swear

what works for me, my burdens premier
hurting me on my journey, i'm bare
so currently an emergency emerges, where learning seems fair

cuz what's occurring's deemed rare
I'm urged to, like surgery, repair while nervously searchin my tares
concerned debri's permanent, impaired, i need a tournaquet to wear
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: World Beware

Postby Emadyville » Oct 8th, '08, 03:16

Wow sick, I'm drunk but I think that was crazy, the rhymes were intense and throughout. great shit, good to read some rhymes on the real.
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Re: World Beware

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 8th, '08, 03:35

thanx, better than seeing the basics
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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