Walk With Me

[Tash8]

every time i hear joe budden's song i always want to write, so after listening to this it inspired me to write and i wrote like 30 bars, but i only liked these ones which actually told a story so is cool

I'll take you through my life and every aspect of it
show you my friends,
let me know if you see any masks or covers
can't decipher between the true ones and mimics
cause nowadays they don't look any different
and most of 'em shook, cause of my rapper-like image
I try to explain myself, hopin' they just might listen
but nah, let's move on to my complications with bitches
and honest to god,
I can't even open my mouth to talk to these bitches
it's like I'm afraid, but what the fuck am I afraid of?
I hide behind my dreams, but now it's time to wake up
It feels like I'm loosing control, cause this ain't me no more
and the picture is coming in clear and vivid
it's someone else's life that I'm livin'
and I gotta get out of his shadow 'fore it gets any further
I hope it's not too late, those dreams weren't even worth it
I keep telling myself it's a facade but it ain't working
so please help me, let me know when I'm getting out of focus

[Emadyville]

I liked the flow on that, the concept was good, and the story was good. Nice job

[<Stiiccy>]

woah tash didnt know you could rap that good
great flow
and preety good story man...
you should really try to rap some more

[Xray]

yo tash is this verse two, cause the track you sent me has different lyrics.

[Tash8]

yo tash is this verse two, cause the track you sent me has different lyrics.

no haha i wrote these

[Rain Matrix]

walk with me, hold my hand on tha beach... blah blah blah blah blah
yur getting out of focus and out of touch with reality

down with tha gayness

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

woah tash didnt know you could rap that good
great flow
and preety good story man...
you should really try to rap some more

lmao tash > 80% of this site

[Steve Spag]

Pretty dope drop man, for real. Didn't know you could write that good, haha. Some really sick lines in there, I was feelin' the whole things though. I liked the style of it and the messege and your wordplay was sick aswell. I think there were some spots that could be stronger, but all in all it's a great peice.

can't decipher between the true ones and mimics
cause nowadays they don't look any different
and most of 'em shook, cause of my rapper-like image
I try to explain myself, hopin' they just might listen
but nah, let's move on to my complications with bitches
and honest to god,
I can't even open my mouth to talk to these bitches

That was my fav. part of it.

Keep it up man!

[Tash8]

thanks guys, i didn't have too much complexity in this, especially with my rhymes, but for now i'm focusing more on writing lines that are rap-able...