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Postby Urban Punk » Oct 14th, '08, 16:32

A wise man once said, “The love you with-hold, is the pain that you carry” till you cold, dead and buried,
Though I’ve learn it better, through living myself, cuz luxury = fee’s and fee’s = debt, and fuck fame it’s overrated! I’ve got no-one to blame, {OK} I never made it, though I’m staying the same, hypnotic when I rhyme, elevatedin my game, still I scruple indiscreet, word for word on the beat,
I've mastered numerology and big bang theology, Performed lobotomies with telekinetic psychology http://www.bebo.com/Devilville
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Re: Got board

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 14th, '08, 23:27

not bad, not great

I get bored too but when I do I write a hell of a lot more than this, which is to say don't give up
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