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I could be tha one

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I could be tha one

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 14th, '08, 18:15

this world is being destroyed by one Hate or is it one Rage taking us down a one Way
all is need is one mic and one Stage, one Blade and one Guage, to care of this one Day

I believe in one Faith, one Saved may there never be one Slave opressed by that one Grave
written on one Page is one Praise happy for my one Fate u won't ever see this one Break

deception can get one Lost in it's one Cause so I pray to my one God who died on one Cross
I make it rain one Thought equals one Drop it's battling one Clock there's no time for one Stop

no not even one Pause that's like telling a crackhead they can only smoke one Rock
so before my one Box is lowered into one Plot I'm gonna spit rhymes like I get one Shot

sometimes they leave one Shocked another one Caught cuz theirs more than one Trap
however one Has one Fact to get one Past if u ain't grinding it's one Stack or one Rap

hit um up with that one Stab so quick it happens in one Flash, problems never leave one Fast
so produce one Track where u take more than one Jab at people telling u to stay on one Path

saying don't sell one Bag for that one Cash, man a cop isn't tha only one Strapped
if I had it my way not even one Gat would let off one Blast so lets make that one Pact

for one Peace, there is one Free and only one Beef, those who only wish to leave one Weak
I'll tear up on one Beat direct it at that one Beast and tell um to come after that one Me

truthfully I'm not one Blood and not even close to one Thug still I hit that one Bud that one Nug
one Must find that one Trust cuz in tha material world one Lusts it's easy to miss that one Love
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Re: I could be tha one

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 15th, '08, 02:26

that one piece is a nice one, so you are that one that i for one like on that one mic, one.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: I could be tha one

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 15th, '08, 06:59

I know it may have gotten a bit repetative but the concept was pretty original, did anyone notice I started with one hate and ended with one love?

Thanks for tha feed Kaotic
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