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Rise To Yur Feet

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Rise To Yur Feet

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 19th, '08, 04:20

some relationships Form Friends others straight Scorn Men
by tha time tha Storm Ends u'll look back on it and Warn Them

stay true to yur People and try to do good when in tha presence of Evil
it's like threading a Needle we all die tha same death so we are Equal

however this world is Divided some media likes to give their information A Bias
I'm trying to get u Ta Riot on that real revolution talk they try to keep Ya Quiet

if I let them control me I'd Be Done, we didn't get a "bail out" so lets get a Refund
yeah cuz in tha end We Won when tha land of tha Free Comes with These Guns

stop misleading us before we Hunt Ya Crew stare at tha millions of Pumped Up Moods
this trigger won't take Month's Ta Use and we got a bullet for each and every One Of U!

so try to remain Calm cuz now we know whose side yur On tha politicians are yur Pawns
u have some of us Conned into thinking I'm Wrong, take back America before it's Gone

that's how this Country was Founded, like colonies there is still Plenty of Townships
back when our Money was Counted, no corruption leaving us Hungry and Surrounded
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Re: Rise To Yur Feet

Postby Emadyville » Oct 19th, '08, 04:34

You've had better, this one was a lot more simple then your others. But the second set of rhymes there was nicccee! that one I really liked it stood out.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Rise To Yur Feet

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 19th, '08, 07:39

dude, keep it up but also progress with something out of the ordinary :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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