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Working Thru It

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 19th, '08, 18:34

they want to Stab My Heart so like bruce willis I'll make sure my Ass Dies Hard
welcome to my Vendetta my thoughts End Fed Up only to Then Get Ya

allow yur eyes Ta See Tha Piece Of Me that just won't Agree with Anything
lyrical clips start Emptying what else does this MC Bring a flow not worth Envying

unless u Take Time to Make Rhymes on tha Same Grind battling a Blank Mind
pretending that yur Brains Fine while tha Pain Dines on yur enflamed Spine

yur Paralyzed living like yur There Ta Die u built an empire and tha Crumbles Fell
in a mirror yur once Humble Self just can't wait to race into this worlds Jungle Hell

where tyranny is Overgrown and no one knows where Closure Roams
I feel like a bi-polar Clone trying to break Ogre Bones
when I say get our Soldiers Home, war keeps this Smoker Stoned
tha bank might revoke Yur Loan but it won't change tha Voters Tone
I know, me and my Vulgar Dome will never be one of tha Posers Own

tha feeling isn't Diminishing I'm trapped In This Skin now every Minutes Grim
literally what yur Witnessing is myself seeing my old self and screaming Finish Him!
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Re: Working Thru It

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 19th, '08, 19:42

Wow man, dope drop! Loved the multie's there, your wordplay was cleverly put.

allow yur eyes Ta See Tha Piece Of Me that just won't Agree with Anything
lyrical clips start Emptying what else does this MC Bring a flow not worth Envying

unless u Take Time to Make Rhymes on tha Same Grind battling a Blank Mind
pretending that yur Brains Fine while tha Pain Dines on yur enflamed Spine

yur Paralyzed living like yur There Ta Die


That was my fav. part, really sick stuff man.

Keep it up dude.
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Re: Working Thru It

Postby Evanz19 » Oct 19th, '08, 19:44

The best rhymes i've seen on this site yet! :y:
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Re: Working Thru It

Postby Emadyville » Oct 19th, '08, 21:06

where tyranny is Overgrown and no one knows where Closure Roams
I feel like a bi-polar Clone trying to break Ogre Bones
when I say get our Soldiers Home, war keeps this Smoker Stoned
tha bank might revoke Yur Loan but it won't change tha Voters Tone
I know, me and my Vulgar Dome will never be one of tha Posers Own


I'm a man who respects rhyming over everything, and after yesterdays post, you truly outdid yourself, especially with what i highlighted. those rhymes were simply insane :worship: :worship: :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Working Thru It

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 19th, '08, 23:30

thanks I had tha sudden urge to write and this came out...
I might add it in with some more rhymes on a track maybe a collab or something
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Re: Working Thru It

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 20th, '08, 03:43

this piece is pretty good man! :o
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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