NEW STEVE SPAG - Chasin' A Ghost

[Steve Spag]

I've been workin' on this peice for a couple days now, still not really sure about it. It's to Shadowville's "End Of My Rope" beat on Soundclick if you wanna check it out. This'll probably end up gettin' changed a bit, but here's a little preview I guess, haha. Hopefully you get the flow for it (I'm sure you'll get it, it's pretty easy, lol). Anyways, let me know what you think, any and all feed is appreciated.

it's time to set it straight, i really gotta let ya' know//
that them records that you make look like you hate me as a foe//
you should take this as a statement, there's a lot of way to go//
and if you do not have no patience, you'll be wasted by my flows//
what you wanna say? just save it, there's a race up on this road//
the stakes are great and on this pavement you'll be taken off and towed//
not one makes it by my side this time, they're chasin' a ghost//
you can say it's like a violent ride, and hate on the host//
and you can't trace where i go, i'm out in space with your hoe//
you're sittin' waitin' there quielty, i ain't takin' her home//
'cause i am makin' her moan, she likes to take it in full//
and when i'm finished with her, she gets kicked right to the curb//
yeah, 'cause that's the way that it goes//
don't say name's that you don't even know, that shouldn't be out exposed//
and when i see you, it's on, your gonna see me at shows//
and once the song'll be finished you're gonna see me explode//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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[gladimnotsoluble]

man i'm tired of seeing you write dope shit, but you never seem to record anything. nice bars. RECORD the mother

[Rain Matrix]

man u are consistent

[Solace]

Agh yeah what gladimnotsoluble said. You always gotta write loads of dope verses, but you dont got much recorded shit. I'm so anxious for Life Overdose. And yeah that was pretty consistent, no fall offs. Good piece man

[Emadyville]

flow was nice, rhymes were kind of simple but they def worked and you rhymed the whole thing the same so props to that, the content was solid, had a few stand out lines, and it ended well, overall it was above par dude, good work

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for all the positive feed guys, it's greatly appreciated.
I'm trying to record as much as possible, but it's hard right now.
During Christmas I'll be going up to Toronto to record 3 full days worth of material, so that'll leave plenty of shit for me to upload here, lol.

Thanks for the comments and patience, lol.

[Solace]

Toronto

[ilovemeghan]

this is well good, impressive how you've rhymed it the same the whole way through, thats my favourite kind of verse. well done
will have to check out sum more of ur lyrics

[Ka0t1c]

it's pretty good, i'd say there's some space to improve it better

[gladimnotsoluble]

"it's time to set it straight, i really gotta let ya' know//
that them records that you make look like you hate me as a foe//"

Really don't like that line though

[Emadyville]

Thanks for all the positive feed guys, it's greatly appreciated.
I'm trying to record as much as possible, but it's hard right now.
During Christmas I'll be going up to Toronto to record 3 full days worth of material, so that'll leave plenty of shit for me to upload here, lol.

Thanks for the comments and patience, lol.

I'd just say do one every few days or one every week to get the best feed, although feed on here is tough sometimes.

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for all the positive feed guys, it's greatly appreciated.
I'm trying to record as much as possible, but it's hard right now.
During Christmas I'll be going up to Toronto to record 3 full days worth of material, so that'll leave plenty of shit for me to upload here, lol.

Thanks for the comments and patience, lol.

I'd just say do one every few days or one every week to get the best feed, although feed on here is tough sometimes.

I love the feed on here, lol. This is the only site I'll up my unfinished work, because there are plenty of artists's here just like me who understand the process to make a track. Last night I wrote a shit-load so I'll have a few more peice's up later on during the week.

[Arabian Shady]

dude that was wiked man,the flow was good, i didnt listen to the beat but i gather but its structure it goes well.altho the part about the bitch thing was a little primary compared to the rest,so apart from that its all good
sick verse in all
Peace

[Xray]

keeping your name strong. keep it going homie