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Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 21st, '08, 01:57

i'm keepin my name strong cuz when i'm speakin, it's GAME ON!
my strength will not weaken from what my brain is now leakin and Kaotic remains calm

i came for one reason to maintain with this feelin which today i play like the same song
cuz my ways are for healin, i don't claim to be Jesus but i stay in the field and make a great season

i maybe not pray long but i thank God who i'm pleasin until i'm gray and lose meanin
i still train cuz i'm dreamin, i aim long
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Oct 21st, '08, 13:27, edited 1 time in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: hold on...

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 21st, '08, 02:10

Pretty nice man. Liked your wordplay for sure, the flow was cool.

Keep it up!
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