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Lettin it loose

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Lettin it loose

Postby lilrossy » Oct 22nd, '08, 07:13

im justa user usin its use to add to this boost,
& an excuse to spit da truth in dis booth,
bout my hazardous youth & my problem is u,
so ima let it loose, like dis beats a muscle & ima fucin masseuse,
so im here to express & let sum shit off my chest,
so i suggest, sit, shut da fuc up & jus digest,
as i undress & protest why im feelin so stressed,
it's got me depressed, its like my life is compressed,
i could make u a fucin list of why i am pissed,
i worked my fucin ass off wit dees iron fists,
now im da guy dat u diss, fuc u, bitch i insist,
dat u wish u never exist, cuz when im blind of piss,
ima hit up ur place & spit my fucin beer in ur face,
beta say grace, cuz ima spray ya with mase,
turn dis shit into a murdercase, bitch its an arms race,
betta pic up da pace, cuz ima erase ya without a trace.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Lettin it loose

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 22nd, '08, 19:07

more emotion = more meaning :8)
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Re: Lettin it loose

Postby lilrossy » Oct 23rd, '08, 09:18

didn't think it was dat bad, but thnxs for da feedback. i'll work on it.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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