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Some shit that happened (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Oct 22nd, '08, 20:36

There was like this big ass fight in the school, and i found out it was one of my friends who had gotten jumped. i was so pissed off today, because i wasn't there to back him. :(
to vent my anger, i'm writing a freestyle.


You ever just have a day that sucks,
a day where u just don't wanna deal wit punks,
well, that day for me has come,
and i feel sick as fuck,
cuz how would u feel if wanna ur friends got jumped,
and u weren't there to back him up?
I was on the other end of the school, i aint even know it happened.
Then came these screams from outside the classroom,
and we could hear the sounds of lockers bein' bashed in.
an' our class, not knowin who it was, started laughin'
cuz this is just another one of those accidental distractions,
if i'da known it was u i woulda jumped in the action,
and made sure all of those pussies had their ass kicked.
cuz u just don't go jumpin one someone's back,
ur supposed to fight like a man, not that cowardess crap.
and it just pisses me off that it went down like that,
so im'a vent my anger with the help of this rap,
i'm just upset that their aint no way to go back,
and i'm tired of beef, and these damn chicken acts,
beatin' u wit numbers, like they can't win by their self,
Yo Cedd, just let me know if u ever beefin wit someone else.
I got u man, i'm just lettin u know how i felt.
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Re: Some shit that happened (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Oct 22nd, '08, 20:41

Chet Starr wrote:such a high school subject, but you covered it well. Well written verse :y:


thx man, just expressing myself. :sweating:
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Re: Some shit that happened (freestyle)

Postby Solace » Oct 22nd, '08, 21:43

Sucks that that happened. Hope hes okay. It was good too :y:
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Re: Some shit that happened (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Oct 22nd, '08, 22:01

i'ma talk to him tonight. hope he's ok too : :'(
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