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Postby lilrossy » Oct 24th, '08, 16:16

beta head to da clinic, my rhymes are sick & pathogenic, im a walkin talkin virus,
getcha bandaids ready, my rhymes slice thru ur skin like a machete,im deadly, like fuckin tigers,
hope ur well a ware, dat u beating me fair 'n' square is as rare as me datin miley cyrus,
i wouldn't dare to front me, i'll leave u runnin scarred, fleein da country, like mexcian migrants,

lilRossy, im da tempter of mankind wit mad rhymes, dat are intellectaul,
so if u don't wanna get hurt bitch, undergo a sex switch, like a fuckin transexaul,
ya'll come & go, thru out da show, but i outlast ya'll all like an eight ball,
i gather up all da fake mc's & take away dare dignities, call it an urban sprawl,

but best of all, i got da ball in my court, ya'll too small like stuart, ya'll jus cant accept it,
i saw u try to grab da top spot like a hot shot, but guess wat, i incepted,
on da mic u can't satisfy, unlike i, jus ask any girl dat chu slept wit,
if we had to sign a petition to get a pistion in hip hop, u would not be accepted.

jus sumthin i wrote cuz i was bored, but let me know wat chu think.
Last edited by lilrossy on Nov 4th, '08, 09:43, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: RandomRhymez

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 28th, '08, 15:47

it's nice .. but if it's shorter it will look better ,, :D
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Re: RandomRhymez

Postby lilrossy » Oct 29th, '08, 05:58

yeah, i tried writting to a different flow. thanks for da feedback.
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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