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new beat -11/18/05 Caleigh Inspired

Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 19th, '05, 17:43

ok this is different type of beat. I don't know how to describe it but I'm sure no one will spit to it. It's one of the beats you just listen to when you're feeling down. That's why I made it and it came out better then I thought it would. I know this isn't creative writing but I didn't think it belonged in the download section.

here's the link to download it:
http://rapidshare.de/files/7858723/11_1 ... d.mp3.html

if you download it please leave feedback on what I can do to make it better or just say what you thought of it. Thanks for taking the time to download it and listen to it.
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Postby AspirinE » Nov 19th, '05, 18:14

Awsome ... I luv the depth


ad some rhythm in the backround to perfect it
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Postby xariuss » Nov 20th, '05, 02:09

Yeah man sounds alright.. but maybe a low damp beat in the background, if it had something there it wud be sick to rap to, i can think of the best chorus for it

but in saying that it's really hot.. and good for an emotional song, i really like it.. i wanna use it lol
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Postby skilzZ » Nov 22nd, '05, 22:01

yes. It#s cool!
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 24th, '05, 19:19

xariuss wrote:Yeah man sounds alright.. but maybe a low damp beat in the background, if it had something there it wud be sick to rap to, i can think of the best chorus for it

but in saying that it's really hot.. and good for an emotional song, i really like it.. i wanna use it lol


if you want to use it feel free to. i think i'm gonna try to make it better/longer today since i dont have much to do.
and thanks for the feedback guys its appreaciated.
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