One Word to Describe...

[Emadyville]

I just kind of thought of this and ran with this, it's only one verse now, but if I'd do a whole song it'd be "One Word". Feedback appreciated.

If you would use only one word to describe me,
Then my vibe be timely and nothing short of lively.
If there was only one word you were given to denote,
You would say that I devote everything that I wrote,
To the truest form even as now the newest norm,
Is to the clear the sky and see the bluest in the storm,
So if there was only one word you could use to indicate,
My place in this whole game it’d be that I vindicate,
Cause it’s not science we all know to win-is-great,
But it’s for self-satisfaction as I self-administrate,
So if one word could explain what he signifies,
It would be respect for it all as he always dignifies,
Even with restrictions cause even if you limit-skies,
And say he’s fake then when will the gimmicks-die?
There’s nothing fake with rhyming so those are vivid-lies,
So there’s only one word left to question is-it-pride?
Or is it truth, cause he could have quit but didn’t-try,
So it’s rap-envisioned no apparition cause image-wise,
He’s the opposite, he’d of lost a bit and finished-tied,
At the bottom with the nobodies but his livid-mind,
Was able to overcome, step forward and pivot-fine…

Ok here's the new verse. More feedback on this, thanks.

Forget a single word he probably needs a sentence,
There’s so many to describe and he would prevent-this,
The list is too long and the truth is that it’s endless,
His limit is the universe and his range is the nexus,
And every time he writes he will always best-this,
Cause rhyming is a drug and my love is infectious,
And think about it I don’t really curse or talk sexist,
Do violence or drugs so what’s left and next-is,
To ex-this list of new rap dudes whose hypocrites,
That flipped the script sold out and dipped in it,
Cashed out on ringtones bought whips with it,
Didn’t it just ruin it with raps new immigrants,
No way to sit back and claim their innocence,
They stole the game and left with dividends,
Meant for the legends, rap gods not citizens,
They were the front line they were raps minute-men,
Who were sick, still are and if they spit-again,
Which I hope for maybe rap will be sick-again,
That’s why I’m here so we don’t hear this shit-again,
So respect is meant for me too whenever I sit-and-pen….

Ok third verse I wrote yesterday...Feed on this too, thanks

Only one sentence would make a coward act,
Like he’s the shit, I think I’d need a paragraph,
And a diagram, you might need a power-graph,
It might take you some time so flip the hourglass,
What is there to say I couldn’t be certainer,
Did I kill this song? Then call me a murderer,
Did I show emotion? Then say I drama-filled,
Do I respect rap? Say I have this genre-killed,
Did I keep a good flow? Say I’m like a creek,
Do I speak my mind? Say that when I speak,
I keep it true to the way it was set up prior,
And I raised the bar it couldn’t get up higher,
I also expose the truth I don’t let up liars,
And my flame is bright I can’t step up fires,
Cause if I do then I’d be blazing like a pothead,
And my ego would grow, I’d become a hothead,
There’s so much I’ve done with everything not said,
Hip-hop has life even of the top five a lot dead,
So I go full throttle still know no role models,
Pop the cork flow bottles fuck it write a whole novel…

[DelinQuent]

concept is great.

rhyming is great. good shit. you better record this

[Steve Spag]

Damn man, that's what I'm talking about. Good shit homie, messege was loud and clear, rhyming was dope, the rhyme-scheme was sick too, nothing short of great.

Keep it up buddy!

[Emadyville]

Thanks DQ and Steve Spag, always respect your opinions. Thanks always feeding and glad you liked it.

[Arabian Shady]

seriously apart from that spetember 11 shit , this was seriously one of your best verses, i've been readin your stuff constantly over the months, you never seem to dissapoint any reader, your writing style is insane man, the structure comes off as tho it was natural, that was incredible to say the least

wiked wiked shit man
Peace

[Emadyville]

^ Damn thank you man. I wrote this in like 20 minutes too haha and I'm glad you been checking out my shit, I appreciate it.

[Emadyville]

Great

Thanks for checking it out Chet

[mcZu]

Nice ( one word to describe it..) nice, nice ,nice, nice

can't say anything else, you better finish this adn record it, and if it is finsihed then record it

[Emadyville]

Thanks bro appreciate it, wrote a new verse I'ma add now so check it.

[mcZu]

Nice second verse, you kinda swicthed it up with how hihop is right now, but still connected it with the ''one word'' concept, rhyme scheme fits with the pattern off the first verse ( which is sick )....
I liked how you started off with

Forget a single word he probably needs a sentence

Overal a nice piece man, you should deff record it
And keep up the goodwork

[Emadyville]

Thanks for checking it again bro, yeah I felt that I may have headed off of the subject a little, but then I thought the concept is to describe my place in this rap scene, and after telling where I am, I decided I should talk about the game in general, or where I want to go, to be the best so that I can stop all this nonsense out there and pay homage to the legends. Thanks again, hope that cleared anything up.

[Solace]

Sick man I immediately noticed the nice usage of multies man. And concept is good

Keep this shit up!

[Emadyville]

Sick man I immediately noticed the nice usage of multies man. And concept is good

Keep this shit up!

thanks for checking it out

[Requiem]

holy crap, nice vocabulary man. never seen those words in multies before reminds somewhat of my lime light
but urs is more consistent with flow, and u have a subject. mine just rambles. but it is similar in the sense it has alot of multies, wide vocab, and overall illness.
i liked it man. i like to see some great stuff in the creative writing section. keep it up

[Emadyville]

Thank you man appreciate it.