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John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby JMG » Nov 1st, '08, 23:10

basically flowed this off the dome...

I aint very political but I sure aint stupid neither
u dont have to be blind to see we need the truest leader
obama's the answer and hes gonna cross the finish line
no change aint gonna be easy but least its in his mind
what if mccain won then heaven forbid he died
then the torch would be passed on to sarah pailin
we all know she aint prepared to take it
shes a fuckin idiot i hear shes kinda nutty too
I wanna fuck her i dont wanna her to lead my country too
i want the troops to stop fighting this meaning less war
mccain wont bring them back till we evens the score
obama's years couldnt get any worse then the previous 4

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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby irfman » Nov 1st, '08, 23:22

Sorry, not feeling it.
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby JMG » Nov 1st, '08, 23:27

apology accepted
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Nov 2nd, '08, 00:05

ehh, not looking politically just rhymes wise

they were pretty poor rhymes, and it felt kinda cheesy

the years better than last 4 was the only good part

but over all it was alright
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby JMG » Nov 2nd, '08, 00:33

thanks, but i really wasnt tryin to be complex with this. I was just sharing my opinion with a freestyle.
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 2nd, '08, 01:08

not too bad
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Nov 2nd, '08, 02:33

JMG wrote:thanks, but i really wasnt tryin to be complex with this. I was just sharing my opinion with a freestyle.


ahh yeah, in that point, you're definitely getting your point across
just, i don't share your opinion lol which is why i was only focusing on the rhymes aha
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby James R. » Nov 2nd, '08, 07:10

You definitely got your point across., Wasn't very complex, but you've already addressed that. Not bad for a political freestyle. I hate writing politics lol. They can be a bitch to get into a song.
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby JMG » Nov 2nd, '08, 07:28

yeah u aint lying I was gonna write a song, but I said fuck it cuz I don't know enough about politics. so i just went the simple route..thanks for the feed.
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby Robbie G » Nov 2nd, '08, 15:45

Pretty simple but it wasn't bad. :y:
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Re: John Mccain aka George Bush III

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 3rd, '08, 09:47

its nice, they kinda sunded like reasons why one should vote for OBAMA,lol
flow was there tho :8)
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