And Another One

[James R.]

Smtn I did to this neptunes beat I heard on youtube. Pretty much a freestyle. Tell me what you think.

You can say I’m whack or you can think I’m crazy, fine
1989 they said I was a baby cryin
Lookin for a shot wit no help so they made me grind
Tryna make an honest dollar had to make a shady dime
Baby I’m, not the type wit a lazy eye
Maybe I, needed the world to pay me mine
On top of the world on popular girls
I’m dropping the pearls just in time to stop when I hurl
Vodka and coke peep the lines I drop when I swirl
Constantly dope keepin minds and thoughts in a whirl
I pop and you curl… so evaluate the situation
Look at these frauds and see how these fakes is imitations
Check my shit, son I never had limitations
Comin at me like you there won’t ramifications
Dude you must have had a trip on ex cuz I’m ferocious
I’m supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

[Robbie G]

Sick stuff man, beginning reminded me of tupac.

[James R.]

Reminded you of Pac? Hot damn I'm on fire! lol thanks for the reply

[jigglinj]

dont like neptunes but when u rap it, it sounds cool

[Emadyville]

Pretty sick, good job

[James R.]

I appreciate the comments guys.

[Rain Matrix]

nice can't wait to see more

[gutawafang]

I've read a couple of your verses. They are so cool. Love it man. Hi. Nice to meet you. You're talented.

[mcZu]

Nice, sick rhymes
Keep up the good work

[James R.]

Thanks guys. I'll try to get a full song out soon. Or at least a drop that's longer than 16 bars. You ever need me to critique your stuff just lemme know.