if we could treat one Another as Brothers it would Rupture their Structure
I Must Work to make sure their treasons uncovered tha rhymes I Mutter
spit and Sputter makes sure fakes are Traumatised no one really Wants Ta Die
I'm a master of lyrical Homicide, 187 records, yeah my crew is On Tha Rise
similar to mercury on a Hot Day my Shots Spray at tha enemy my Thoughts Hate
happy I Got Plays this revolutionary style will Not Fade I grind like a Saw Blade
amongst tha Many I'm not one to Envy an MC but as far as lines I've got Plenty
my brain is far from Empty most of tha time I'm Friendly unless yur trying to End Me
then I'll score a Battlefield Win like I Have No Feelings just a Numb Core
ready to drop One More I'm not running From War yur error was Unforced
Tired Thoughts
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Tired Thoughts
by Rain Matrix » Nov 3rd, '08, 06:16
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by Xray » Nov 3rd, '08, 09:04
Rain Matrix wrote:similar to mercury on a Hot Day my Shots Spray at tha enemy my Thoughts Hate
happy I Got Plays this revolutionary style will Not Fade I grind like a Saw Blade
amongst tha Many I'm not one to Envy an MC but as far as lines I've got Plenty
my brain is far from Empty most of tha time I'm Friendly unless yur trying to End Me
Flow is superb on those lines, dope shit. Oh and your structure is always 100% so good shit on that to.
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by mcZu » Nov 3rd, '08, 14:45
I agree with xray, the flow was great on those lines
Nice piece man, I enjoyed reading it
Nice piece man, I enjoyed reading it
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by James R. » Nov 4th, '08, 00:31
Flow was superb. Vocab is always good with you. Nothing to complain about lol. And believe me I tried to find something.
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by Darkblade44431 » Nov 5th, '08, 01:29
Great lines there, man. lyrics and flow, rly nice!
keep it up.
keep it up.
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by lilrossy » Nov 6th, '08, 10:20
dope rhymes man. really like it. hope i can write as good as this soon. keep it up
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Tired Thoughts
by Ice_Scarred » Nov 8th, '08, 04:41
Your whole structure was dope. Your rhymes are high quality, and most of the time complex. Dope 
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