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I'll Never Change (2nd verse added)

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I'll Never Change (2nd verse added)

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 4th, '08, 01:37

tha More They Waste tha more it buries our Glory Days and so tha Story Breaks
Breaking News I can see tha Fake In U
yur only interested in Satan's Truth that's why this Nations Doomed
yur bringing about it's Downfall even tho my Towns Small
my Hearts Big as an Artist I rip Apart This Carcaus
known as tha Darkness to expose it's Guarded Secrets
even if no one Believe's It hate is our Weakness
let that be Repeated so evil can be Defeated
fears can be Annoying it's a methodical Poison
that's Toying with those of us Enjoying not Destroying
a Way Of Life u'll have to Face Tha Hype
I might Stay Ta Fight but I'd never Take Ya Rights

(hook)
I'll never change I'd much rather Die First
if that's what u want then gas up My Hearse
those who can see tha truth don't like Liars
this is yur call to arms tha situations Dire
people are pulling america apart like Pliers
herding their sheep right into tha Fire
there's no time for sleep I'm not Tired
they want to sell u death don't be a Buyer

Catastrophic Mic Abuse he Has Ta Toss It Like Tha Clues
Into Mixes there are no Simple Fixes for a Single System
tha people didn't get Bailed Out but were not gonna Fail Now
toss me into a Jail House but don't think my coffin lids Nailed Down
I wasn't Ever Dead trail me like tha Weather Jets
we Accept Yur Test please believe we'll Never Rest
tha American dream will soon Ressurect
were like Meth Addicts notice it before it Gets Tragic
our Debts Massive about a Quadrillon
so now my Raw Skill Wins untill tha Law Kills Him
Fuck Police u better Bust Yo Piece we still Love Those Streets
that Troubles Me cuz I'm trying to Hustle Free

(hook)
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Nov 4th, '08, 16:57, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: I'll Never Change

Postby neversnooze » Nov 4th, '08, 04:05

this sounded political/war like lyrics which was very good and had a little dark theme to it as well

i especially like the ending of the hook "they want to sell you death dont be a buyer" good stuff :y:
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Re: I'll Never Change

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 4th, '08, 05:33

i like the chorus a lot :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: I'll Never Change (2nd verse added)

Postby mcZu » Nov 4th, '08, 18:49

Nice piece, liked the rhyme pattern and the flow :y:
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