Im Psychotic

[lilrossy]

my thoughts are scurrilous, fuck willingness, i kill mothafucas who are spurios,
im furious, like eddie i'll leave you mothafucas delirous, bitch it wuld be hilarious,

ima teach you a lesson usin various weapons, leave you coated in a blood dressin,
tell by ur facial expression ur stressin, not knowin when im gonna show sum aggression,

bitch ima put you thru pain, like ur listnin to lil wayne, over and over again,
call me inzane, call me inhumane, im left standin when im collidin wit a train,

i onslaught wit force, show no remorse, bitch i jack off when im watchin saw,
fuck the laws, im breakin down ya door, tossin you in my basement wit the other corpse.

sumthin i put together quik caz i was bored. but plz let me know wat chu think.

[grabdat]

I laughed at the saw line :\ not because it was funny.

[Slim Zaddy]

well i think it's pretty cool .. i did'nt like the concept but it flow well ... so gd luck pal

[Ice_Scarred]

I laughed at the saw line :\ not because it was funny.

I actually did to!
Pretty funny stuff you got there. Great punchlines!

[lilrossy]

thanks for the feedbak guys, i appreciate it

[MC Anonymous]

Lmao@ the saw line.

I liked this, although you could've added a little more funny punchlines

[theJFKshow]

I like the last 2.

[Rain Matrix]

good piece made me think of American Psycho and I'll always love that song

[Solace]

good piece made me think of American Psycho and I'll always love that song

Yea ^

[mcZu]

Enjoyed reading it, nicely done

[lilrossy]

thanks alot guys, im really glad you like it. thanks for checkin it out and leavin sum feedbak!

[Arabian Shady]

my thoughts are scurrilous, fuck willingness, i kill mothafucas who are spurios,
im furious, like eddie i'll leave you mothafucas delirous, bitch it wuld be hilarious,

wiked line
good drop

[lilrossy]

thanks man! tryed to up my vocab on this one, glad you liked it.

[Xray]

my thoughts are scurrilous, fuck willingness, i kill mothafucas who are spurios,
im furious, like eddie i'll leave you mothafucas delirous, bitch it wuld be hilarious,

ima teach you a lesson usin various weapons, leave you coated in a blood dressin,
tell by ur facial expression ur stressin, not knowin when im gonna show sum aggression,

Wack vocab. Way, way to forced to trying to be lyrical. The rest was pretty good.