Shooting Star

[JMG]

Half is done, youll hear the whole version recorded soon I hope.

we had a better bond then a leperchaun and his gold
she left me stranded tho in panic mode like the titanic boat
now i stand alone tryin to slam and close the door for us
and force it shut i gotta board it up but lord its tough
to see the cord is cut cuz morning comes but the sun is gone
a storm erupts and rumbles dawn but i got to stumble on
but how do u roll with the punches when ur soul is in crutches
cuz when u give ur heart u hope to get that returned
but it seems the apple of my eye had a worm
she was so deceitful i never expected that from her
i fell hard when she told me things that i havent heard
but when it comes to actions, words, she was lackin verb's
i thought we built a foundation but she was trackin dirt

{hook} with my back to the wall i think im fallin though
i needed u girl did u hear me callin u
but in the end i found out how u truly are
be careful what u wish for apon that shootin star
X2

[*MIRANDA*]

wow that was very beautiful
i could def relate to that
"to see the cord is cut cuz morning comes but the sun is gone"
luved that line

[Emadyville]

Good rhymes, pretty dope man

[MC Anonymous]

The rhymes were nice! Good job!

[mcZu]

Great, pretty sick lines man
Liked this one:

but it seems the apple of my eye had a worm

[JMG]

cool thanks glad u liked it

peace

[Ka0t1c]

it's very good but u spelled some things out wrong like bored = board, build = built

this piece is a great addition to the site!

[JMG]

thanks for catching that, i took care of it.

[Steve Spag]

Damn man, nice multit's in there during the begining. That peice was pretty dope dude, was really feelin' it.

we had a better bond then a leperchaun and his gold
she left me stranded tho in panic mode like the titanic boat
now i stand alone tryin to slam and close the door for us
and force it shut i gotta board it up but lord its tough

Feelin' the deepness, and the way you present it is just great.

Keep it up man!

[Nizar]

good job dude

[JMG]

cool thanks glad u liked it

peace