Scattertidus - (Lyrics of the young and random)

[Ice_Scarred]

NOTE: some are kinda jumbled up, I was writing whatever came to my head, so its not good at all. My notebook was kinda messy aswell, because I was doodling and writing whatever. So some stuff is out of place! This by no means is my best work, and I could have done much better. I will post more serious stuff in the future. Sorry for the inconvenience! You can still give constructive criticism! I need that a lot anyway!



The blood stains the field, mining the minds of severed ties/
With the withered lives of several lies, what a surprise/
I hear the noise, of little boys who could not have a voice/
Who got raped in the woods, murdered in the back with little toys/
I watch you self destruct, nervous system hangin out ya guts/
Through your mouth, blood squirts out/
You are going through a drought/
Through the rain, go insane, out ya brain, your in pain/
Out your mind, it is time, for this line, you are mine/


Your done, you’re a sucka, you’ve been played/
Through the waves of the way, all the struggles go unpaid/
From the toughest of the marks, on this way you will march/
You have failed through the dawn, you were torn through the scorn/
But your spirit lingers on, through the midst of the fight/
Who was wrong, who was right?/

[Ice_Scarred]

NOTE: some are kinda jumbled up, I was writing whatever came to my head, so its not good at all. My notebook was kinda messy aswell, because I was doodling and writing whatever. So some stuff is out of place! This by no means is my best work, and I could have done much better. I will post more serious stuff in the future. Sorry for the inconvenience! You can still give constructive criticism! I need that a lot anyway!



The blood stains the field, mining the minds of severed ties/
With the withered lives of several lies, what a surprise/
I hear the noise, of little boys who just could not have a voice/
Who got raped in the woods, murdered in the back with little toys/
I watch you self destruct, nervous system hangin out ya guts/
Through your mouth, blood squirts out/
You are going through a drought/
Through the rain, go insane, out ya brain, your in pain/
Out your mind, it is time, for this line, you are mine/


Your done, you’re a sucka, you’ve been played/
Through the waves of the way, all the struggles go unpaid/
From the toughest of the marks, on this way you will march/
You have failed through the dawn, you were torn through the scorn/
But your spirit lingers on, through the midst of the fight/
Who was wrong, who was right?/

[James R.]

Not bad. I like the rhyme scheme you got going on. Vocab is pretty good. It's definitely kinda random lol. I like the 1st verse you had going wayy better. Had more meaning. Much more purpose and the direction gave it the extra push to be pretty nice. I'd like to see you finish that. Keep it up.

[Ice_Scarred]

Not bad. I like the rhyme scheme you got going on. Vocab is pretty good. It's definitely kinda random lol. I like the 1st verse you had going wayy better. Had more meaning. Much more purpose and the direction gave it the extra push to be pretty nice. I'd like to see you finish that. Keep it up.

lol! yeah i was in a very random mood, XD. Thanks for your comment!

[lilrossy]

like James R. i liked the first one better. the little boys line was pretty sick (random, but sick). Type of twistid shit bizarree would write. ova all was a good drop, keep it up man

[Ice_Scarred]

like James R. i liked the first one better. the little boys line was pretty sick (random, but sick). Type of twistid shit bizarree would write. ova all was a good drop, keep it up man

'Thanks dude. I'll try better next time!

[Ice_Scarred]

like James R. i liked the first one better. the little boys line was pretty sick (random, but sick). Type of twistid shit bizarree would write. ova all was a good drop, keep it up man

'Thanks dude. I'll try better next time!