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NEW - Bring It Back (SCRAP)

Postby Solace » Nov 28th, '08, 23:55

A rushed, crappy write.The reason some of the words are capitalized randomly in the sentence is because it references an old song. Eg. If I Die2Nite is a 2Pac song, and I Dont Understand It is a Big L song.

[Verse 1]
Sitting there just thinking, what the fuck,
Is up with these people, man their music sucks,
I see Lil Wayne "ripping" up A Millie, oh jesus...
Ill rip up A Millie into a million pieces,
Lil Wayne aint a gay? What the fuck he doing with Birdman,
Id rather lick Rosie O Donald and eat a couple turds man,
Tupac was one of the greatests, naw your wrong,
Tupac's still one of the greatest, go listen to his songs,
Soulja Boy, this aint where you belong; bitch your wack,
I hear you one more time my ears'll have a heart attack (wha?)
Big L come on homie, get out of that casket,
Teach these wack fuckers how to start rapping,
Cause they're lame man and its a shame,
How famous they are, how the fuck did they get in the rap game?
Run DMC, bombed that shit like a fucking terrorist,
People listen to it so long they like, "Wheres my bitch?",
If I Die 2Nite, How Long Will They Mourn Me?
Before he pulls the trigger I just wish they would warn me,
And personally, im just Fed Up With The Bullshit,
I Dont Understand It, so im letting off a full clip!

[Chorus x2]
Bring it back, bring back that old shit,
Bring back Shakur, Biggie, bring back that cold shit,
Bring back that bold shit, Bring it all back,
Im tired of hearing of this shit, this shit is all wack,
With the type "hip-hop" coming out these days,
Makes me with there was a god, sit there and pray.
And if theres a day, which true hip hop comes back,
Hopefully my life will fix, ill be back on track.

[Verse 2]
You aint shit, you never was, and never will be,
Im immortal, and the day that you win is the day that you kill me,
And im willing, to be target practice for the ill weak,
motherfuckers running they mouth as if they were dealing,
you got fans? havent you noticed their age,
you got 9 year olds singing Low everyday,
Fuck Tha Cartier, and fuck Freedom,
If you havent noticed yet Akon sounds like a freaking,
12 year old girl going through some puberty,
Same thang with T-Pain, its true indeed,
Soulja Boy, man you aint no fucking soldier,
You got feathers on your shoulders, man i got boulders,
i got problems, and there aint no way to solve em,
I wish my parents were dead, especially my father,
But you aint got shit wrong in your life,
Playing with toys is the closest youll ever get to playing with a knife.

[Chorus x2]
Last edited by Solace on Nov 29th, '08, 16:45, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (UNDONE)

Postby lilrossy » Nov 29th, '08, 01:06

i thought it was pretty good. it kind of reminded me of cassidy's Damn i miss the game track. i liked the lil wayne line, that was cool. look forward to u postin verse 2 if u r. :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (UNDONE)

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '08, 02:14

lilrossy wrote:i thought it was pretty good. it kind of reminded me of cassidy's Damn i miss the game track. i liked the lil wayne line, that was cool. look forward to u postin verse 2 if u r. :y:

i will of course post the 2nd verse if i finish it, and ill revise the first verse so its better. Thanks for feeding it man, i hope the finished product is impressive :happy:
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (Revising)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 29th, '08, 15:11

nice to hear from ya again man ,, nd u hve impressed me on this one ,. it's hot in terms of everything,, this time both verses were okay i liked both of em .. so keep on dropping . :y:
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (Revising)

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '08, 15:13

z_em wrote:nice to hear from ya again man ,, nd u hve impressed me on this one ,. it's hot in terms of everything,, this time both verses were okay i liked both of em .. so keep on dropping . :y:

Thanks man, cool that you think its hot :flower:
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (SCRAP)

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 30th, '08, 21:55

it's good, awesome concept
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW - Bring It Back (SCRAP)

Postby Solace » Nov 30th, '08, 22:05

Kaotic wrote:it's good, awesome concept

Thanks! :y:
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