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Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 02:12

Listening to that old Soul Intent Live 92 video, i just felt like freestyling:

Lyrics are sick, whenever im spitting it,
Spraying this unwritten shit, this old wicked shit,
I just enjoy kicking it, listen to a beat, and then start ripping it,
Go have a live performance and then start i lipping it,
And if you dont like me, man i dont give a shit,
You just gotta have no cares, and just live a bit,
Getting on a feature and then im killing it,
It seems Big L has resurrected, the hip-hop gap im filling it,
So if you aint feeling this, you gunna be the one i kill bitch,
The stores are selling sickness and im just stealing it.
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 1st, '08, 02:20

This was really good, 9/10.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 02:21

MC Anonymous wrote:This was really good, 9/10.

Haha and i thought it was average

Thanks man! :y:
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Dec 1st, '08, 02:24

Very good :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 02:27

Emadyville wrote:Very good :y:

Thankks :y: :y:

Its amazing how much shit rhymes with "spitting it" :o
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 1st, '08, 03:28

Lyrics are sick, whenever im spitting it,
Spraying this unwritten shit, this old wicked shit,
I just enjoy kicking it, listen to a beat, and then start ripping it,
Go have a live performance and then start i lipping it,
And if you dont like me, man i dont give a shit,
You just gotta have no cares, and just live a bit,


that part's good, the rest isn't.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 04:27

Kaotic wrote:
Lyrics are sick, whenever im spitting it,
Spraying this unwritten shit, this old wicked shit,
I just enjoy kicking it, listen to a beat, and then start ripping it,
Go have a live performance and then start i lipping it,
And if you dont like me, man i dont give a shit,
You just gotta have no cares, and just live a bit,


that part's good, the rest isn't.

Thaanks man :y:
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby lilrossy » Dec 1st, '08, 08:44

it was alright 4 a freestyle. good drop anyway, keep it up :y:
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 14:10

lilrossy wrote:it was alright 4 a freestyle. good drop anyway, keep it up :y:

Thanks :y:
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 1st, '08, 19:20

it's good i like it
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 1st, '08, 22:06

z_em wrote:it's good i like it

Thanks :)
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby James R. » Dec 2nd, '08, 18:34

Pretty hot freestyle man. I'm feelin it a lot. I like that you stick to the same rhyme throughout the entire spit. Shit like that adds to it a lot. Just shows how much control you have over the language. Hot shit.
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Re: Spitting It - Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 2nd, '08, 22:09

James R. wrote:Pretty hot freestyle man. I'm feelin it a lot. I like that you stick to the same rhyme throughout the entire spit. Shit like that adds to it a lot. Just shows how much control you have over the language. Hot shit.

:o Holy shit i wasnt expecting anything like that. Thanks :worship:
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