Mission From Hell

[lilrossy]

Ima leave ya'll scarred to stare in mirrors wit my blasphemous lyrics,
im the adversary of god, call me the cheif of evil spirits,
atrocious mentality, everyday grievous offences against morality,
my demonic rhymes are portrayed in ya minds as brutality,
threatening great harm, causing fear, i cant be curbed,
im 1 third human, the rest is this demon that has emerged,
my aim is to inflict pain & make u suffer wit my barbarous rhymes,
i'll rip out ya fucin spine & stick up bin laden's behind,
i aint scarred of no one, im invulnerable to fear or intimidation,
aint no devil imitation, the real thing is wat ur facin,
i'll shit on Mr. T's doorstep, ring the bell & ask for sum paper,
snatch his daughter & duck tape her, pull down her panties & fucin rape her,
im dangerous, spontaneous shit happens when im aimin dis,
fucin wit me's a major risk, make u wet ur pants & leave u layin in piss,
i take a life & drag ones feet, show em my heat, make em sink 'n' weap,
im on a mission from hell, i'll be bak, cuz my purpose is incomplete.

let me know wat u think!

[Slim Zaddy]

i think it's good ... .. keep dropping bro

[lilrossy]

thanks alot man.

[James R.]

Wasnt bad at all man. Flowed well, that was probably the best quality of the song. The rhyming was pretty basic, I'd like to see you start rhyming entire words, not just the last syllable i.e. mortality & brutality and intimidation and facin. You do that and it'll make it flow better and it'll seem more complex even though it won't really have to be. Keep practicing.

[lilrossy]

yeah man, i know wat u mean, thanks for the feedbak and the advice. i'll work on it.
appreciate it.