from this side of the computer i type cuz i'm a writer never on strike
so i won't hide, i fight for my future whenever i arrive, no hype
sometimes i'm a psycho with humor but most like what i'm doin
my duty's to revive from the numerous lies cuz of rumors
once in the studio, the mic supplies me to tune up my eyes
see me rise, there's always room, why not sooner to fight?
cuz i am a loser, who's in disquise, camoflauge suited, tyin my boots
and my persuit's compromised cuz after June comes July
that's when i shoot my goodbyes cuz i'm truly hogtied
i can't remove what i signed onto a few dotted lines
yeah, i wanna resign, i guess God should decide
will it be bad news, Mom, don't cry
Brothers i don't mean to traumatize too
but the problem's mine, man i can't lose
how could i rewind back to my happy times...
Just Being Me
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Re: Just Being Me
by Steve Spag » Dec 3rd, '08, 00:29
Damn man, solid drop. Diggin' the deepness, and was also feelin' the wordplay. I like the way it sounded while I was reading it out loud, deffinetly a nice piece.
Keep it up dude!
Keep it up dude!
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Re: Just Being Me
by James R. » Dec 3rd, '08, 01:26
The way it felt when you read it aloud was the best part about this. The way it's written is perfect for anyone to deliver. The lyrics were decent, the rhyming was good as well. Keep it up man.
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Re: Just Being Me
by Ka0t1c » Dec 3rd, '08, 03:21
thanx you two 
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Just Being Me
by lilrossy » Dec 3rd, '08, 05:29
man this is a sick verse. not one bad line in it. i luved the way it flowed and rhymed, it was good to read. thought the first few lines were really good, which got me enthused to keep reading. keep it commin.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Just Being Me
by mcZu » Dec 3rd, '08, 18:40
It flowed perfectly, loved the lyrics.
Rhymes were not bad, not the most complicated rhymes.
But still this piece is great, it still had the deepness.
Always enjoy reading your pieces man,
keep dropping
Rhymes were not bad, not the most complicated rhymes.
But still this piece is great, it still had the deepness.
Always enjoy reading your pieces man,
keep dropping
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Re: Just Being Me
by MC Anonymous » Dec 3rd, '08, 22:06
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: Just Being Me
by Ka0t1c » Dec 3rd, '08, 22:27
lilrossy wrote:man this is a sick verse. not one bad line in it. i luved the way it flowed and rhymed, it was good to read. thought the first few lines were really good, which got me enthused to keep reading. keep it commin.
well thanx man, i'm glad u enjoy checking my lyrics out!
you too mcZu and MC Anonymous for liking this piece
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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