being insane in the brain drives the locomotion for the lyrical train
optical gain refrains my mind from the critical aim
rhyming over mystical games, causes the release of my demons like Ouiji
destruction is freaky, corruption will see me, eruption of six 3's
causes 666 to be free as it infects my innocent mind
blazing behind is a trail of fire that continues my demon sent grind
bending some spines like folding books, my holdings took
people's souls until those hearts they showed me shook
flowed these hooks because I can't write damn choruses
bam, my flow stay bright like these damn solstices
whose soul is this, I'm about to suck the life outta it
when I spout and spit you better never doubt my shit
that's doubt isn't it? you don't believe my imperial
I spit rhymes that blind even God's eye material
why I'm serial? because the killer in me massacre's MC's
you have no more future, so only in the past occurred your sleeze.
The Darkened Equinox.
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The Darkened Equinox.
by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 22:54
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by Robbie G » Dec 9th, '08, 00:03
Good stuff. Pretty consistent through the whole thing 
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 00:05
Thanks bro,
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by James R. » Dec 9th, '08, 00:19
Hot shit man. The beginning was better than the end. Seemed like you put so much into the start you began to run out of steam lol. But still, nice shit man. Can't wait until you start recording.
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 00:22
James R. wrote:Hot shit man. The beginning was better than the end. Seemed like you put so much into the start you began to run out of steam lol. But still, nice shit man. Can't wait until you start recording.
LOL yeah, also the beat is weird as it progresses then decelerates. So I had to keep it in tempo so when I do spit on it it'll flow perfectly.
Thanks for the feed bro
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by mcZu » Dec 9th, '08, 19:10
Great start, first couple of lines killed it.
Great vocab, flow was nice, structure was nice
Great piece man, always enjoy reading your work
Keep up the great work
Great vocab, flow was nice, structure was nice
Great piece man, always enjoy reading your work
Keep up the great work
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by Ka0t1c » Dec 11th, '08, 06:39
if your rhymes were as good as these 4 lines, this piece would have been dope
other than that, this piece was pretty basic, nothing special.
flowed these hooks because I can't write damn choruses
bam, my flow stay bright like these damn solstices
whose soul is this, I'm about to suck the life outta it
when I spout and spit you better never doubt my shit
other than that, this piece was pretty basic, nothing special.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: The Darkened Equinox.
by Slim Zaddy » Dec 11th, '08, 18:00
that is ho t.. i liked it .. keep it up pal ..
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