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NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 9th, '08, 19:22

Just wrote this piece today, just for fun really. Pretty much just multi's in this drop, that was pretty much the whole point to it, lol. It's kinda different, got a really unique flow for it, which I hope you get. I wrote this one acapella, so I could get a beat built around it one day. Anyways, let me know what ya' think, any and all feedback is appreciated as usual.

I'm THAT DUDE in your BATHROOM, with FAT DOOBS//
Wearin' PLAD SHOES as I RAP RUDE//
I GRAB BOOBS with TATTOOS like I HAVE TO//
And THAT'S TRUTH, I suck on 'em like a VACCUUM//
This ATTITUDE gets MATTHEW to SMASH CREWS//
With DAD'S TOOLS, I can't 'cause of this BAD FLU//
I PASS BREWS 'round the bar, send some right AT YOU//
'Til PAST NOON, the ingrediant is my ASS JUICE//
So FACK YOU if you ACT COOL, I'll BLAST THROUGH//
Your LAST SCHOOL during MASS, "Where is that FAT FOOL?"//
A RAD DUEL's what we'll HAVE, the winner gets MAD LOOT//
And GRASS TOO, the loser gets his own PADDED ROOM//
COLLAPSE SOON on your CRAP VIEWS on THAT TUNE//
Your ASKED TO TAP before I get in the BATSUIT//
And BASH YOU on every TRACK quicker than FAST FOOD//
I'm THAT CRUEL, because I'm BACK in PAT'S BOOTH//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Emadyville » Dec 9th, '08, 19:40

Damn. Sick rhyming, I need to hear this :whistle:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby The GameKeeper » Dec 9th, '08, 19:42

I like it man... you should do the 2nd and third verse the same way using the same syllable throughout the whole verse... it takes talent to do that... i like it alot man...
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:05

Holy shit man, thats great. Thats crazy how you thought of like a million multies :worship:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby mcZu » Dec 9th, '08, 22:11

Some sick multies :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 9th, '08, 22:28

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you're liking this piece.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:29

That was good for what it was.
8/10. :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby James R. » Dec 10th, '08, 00:09

Not bad. Nice how you stayed with the same rhyme throughout the piece without repeating rhymes often if at all.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Dec 10th, '08, 00:12

steve spag you dat dude mane. :rock:
see they can trigger me but they'll never figure me out...

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 11th, '08, 15:20

it's sick man ,, i like your multies ..
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 11th, '08, 20:20

Thanks for the positive feed guys, much respect.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 11th, '08, 22:28

really nice flow... I want to hear this audio as well, keep writing man :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - THAT DUDE

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '08, 16:16

LMFAO!!
dude that was wiked man, the flow was one of the best part about it, multies were well used, it reminded me of the first verse from Murder merder, but that was hilarious!!
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