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Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:25

Retarded metaphors for a dude who types like a beta whore
Rain left ya ass mega sore, now I'm bout' to show ya the betta' door
I don't need messages in parenthesis or quotation marks
to spit fire and leave rashes that'll make the who TR nation spark
biting off cassidy's style, get off his dick, when ya cough n spit
his cum comes off ya tongue and lands on the floor as broth n shit
just a moth I slit with wicked lyrical wizardry, the mystical entity
rapping so rapidly the lyrical bullets ricocheted of my tongue and dent his knees
making this roc disappear like Houdini and kill all those who seen me
blast ya like rocket launches so strong it made ya whole crew fear me
who's next? I'll make this roc see the bottom of hell like Dwayne Johnson
and your wordplay child's play like Chuckie, all it does is induce gay nonsense
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:29

DAMN :-#
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:31

shadymademe wrote:DAMN :-#

Running his mouth... had to.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:32

*Yaawwnnnn*.. what part of that is supposed to hurt?

tha basic multies?
tha LAME punches?
tha NO Wordplay?
tha fake personals?

lol why'd he diss me?... your on rain's dick lmao... DICKRYDER!!! :o haha fall back fagboy.!
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:35

lol basically... if anyone try saying i suck

for once

try doing what i do

2 multie rhyme schemes going on at the same time

1.. or more .... wordplays per rhyme scheme

ah punch every line

you coudnt do what i do ..... never ....... it'll be OLD shit at best
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:36

J roc wrote:lol basically... if anyone try saying i suck

for once

try doing what i do

2 multie rhyme schemes going on at the same time

1.. or more .... wordplays per rhyme scheme

ah punch every line

you coudnt do what i do ..... never ....... it'll be OLD shit at best

Obviously this diss hurt you if you are inclined to post twice. Everything you do is weak.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:36

MC Anonymous wrote:
shadymademe wrote:DAMN :-#

Running his mouth... had to.


see, that's the thing .... your riding rain Sooooooooo hard by making this ..... i always thanked people by peeping what i write .... i never even talked to you
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:37

MC Anonymous wrote:
J roc wrote:lol basically... if anyone try saying i suck

for once

try doing what i do

2 multie rhyme schemes going on at the same time

1.. or more .... wordplays per rhyme scheme

ah punch every line

you coudnt do what i do ..... never ....... it'll be OLD shit at best

Obviously this diss hurt you if you are inclined to post twice. Everything you do is weak.


the second post was @ everybody .... not you .... notice i aid "anyone" ..... everything i do is weak?... battle me on ANY other site .... you woudn't touch me in ANY cat fagboy.!... up your level
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:38

J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
J roc wrote:lol basically... if anyone try saying i suck

for once

try doing what i do

2 multie rhyme schemes going on at the same time

1.. or more .... wordplays per rhyme scheme

ah punch every line

you coudnt do what i do ..... never ....... it'll be OLD shit at best

Obviously this diss hurt you if you are inclined to post twice. Everything you do is weak.


the second post was @ everybody .... not you .... notice i aid "anyone" ..... everything i do is weak?... battle me on ANY other site .... you woudn't touch me in ANY cat fagboy.!... up your level

Anger is exposed through this piece. You so pissed right now I can hear the keys smashing together.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:39

Why not this site? :unsure:
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:42

MC Anonymous wrote:
J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Obviously this diss hurt you if you are inclined to post twice. Everything you do is weak.


the second post was @ everybody .... not you .... notice i aid "anyone" ..... everything i do is weak?... battle me on ANY other site .... you woudn't touch me in ANY cat fagboy.!... up your level

Anger is exposed through this piece. You so pissed right now I can hear the keys smashing together.


lolll... see i'm never mad over the net ... NEVER ... just cause i call u fagboy .... dont mean im mad .... im talking to ah girl that i like on msn .... im better then you ... your on Rain matrix's dick .... why would i be mad?? .... you cant tell how im feeling over tha net dumbass loll

& @ dude above .... cause this site got tha stupidest votes lol ... ah dude gave away tha punch cat cause mine were too complex.. he said he had to think about them ... n tha other dude didnt have 1 punch ..... sooo i aint gonna waste my bars on this site lol
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:45

Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:47

J roc wrote:& @ dude above .... cause this site got tha stupidest votes lol ... ah dude gave away tha punch cat cause mine were too complex.. he said he had to think about them ... n tha other dude didnt have 1 punch ..... sooo i aint gonna waste my bars on this site lol

your not gunna waste your bars on this site...you posted up like 3 or 4 pieces already havent you?
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:50

MC Anonymous wrote:Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.


lollll.... its hard to beleive someone can have ah girl over tha net?? ... me = more of ah life then you .... i aint been on this site for soooooooooo long until recently .... its been like, 19 months ... n i aint got 500 posts .... what about u? ..... & u lame as hell if u can't beleive guys cant talk to girls girls loll ... says sumit about ur relationship status :o

& i learned in school .... "text" only has like 10% or so of ah conversation .... theres tha pitch, & body motions you aint gettin ..... your basing me being mad on 10% of ah conversation

& you take this shit more serios then i do ..... if u think im pounding tha keyboard of ah WACK diss at me .... go to another non biased site n post it... serios lmao
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:52

shadymademe wrote:
J roc wrote:& @ dude above .... cause this site got tha stupidest votes lol ... ah dude gave away tha punch cat cause mine were too complex.. he said he had to think about them ... n tha other dude didnt have 1 punch ..... sooo i aint gonna waste my bars on this site lol

your not gunna waste your bars on this site...you posted up like 3 or 4 pieces already havent you?


lol... recycled concepts i made worse... or light shit i woudnt post anywhere else .... nothing i post is my best .... forum shit isn't my style lol ..... u tryina argue with shit u dont understand smh
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