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A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 18th, '08, 20:51

just when I thin I've Done It All santa comes down the chimney and I Punch His Balls
he doubles over and Chuckles so I scrape his nuts off my Knuckles mental From Withdrawls

then I give tha Fat Man a Backhand for trying to Stop Me with his obese Body
this year I'm definitly Naughty miss claus agree's she likes to call me Papi

I don't know why he Came Here he lost his manhood and his bitch all in the Same Year
my swagger is what his Game Fears miss claus says beastiality no but I did fuck Rain Dear (Ahh)

damn this holdiay season I'm Too Raw spending all my money upgrading my Booze Stock
I'm drunk as fuck running Through Cops why cuz on my way to taking down Rudolph

you see he's my christmas dinner I'm going to savagely eat his innards in a blizzard
then go home and hit the liquor point a gun at the mirror with my finger on the Trigger
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Boston » Dec 18th, '08, 21:08

stick to battling, nothing special at all.
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 18th, '08, 21:17

dude this is creative writing not try to impress everybody all the time writing

it was meant to be a fun little keystyle and that much was accomplished
but thanks for the feedback anyway :b:
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 18th, '08, 21:20

i think it's good .. i liked it .. rhymes were decent .. :y:
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Boston » Dec 18th, '08, 21:30

alright bro. good luck then.
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 18th, '08, 21:40

pretty good and i think Boston is just shallow
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby The GameKeeper » Dec 18th, '08, 21:44

Kaotic wrote:pretty good and i think Boston is just shallow


Agreed...
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Boston » Dec 19th, '08, 00:24

shallow on what though?
because im not as easily impressed as you guys?

i said its nothing special at all, im sure he will admit it too.

everyone is entitled to their own opinion, get over it.
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Solace » Dec 19th, '08, 00:52

Boston wrote:shallow on what though?
because im not as easily impressed as you guys?

i said its nothing special at all, im sure he will admit it too.

everyone is entitled to their own opinion, get over it.

hes entitled on his opinion of you being shallow then.

Good piece for what it was, funny :y:
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Boston » Dec 19th, '08, 01:50

i never said they werent entitled to their opinion now did i?

i asked a simple question on HOW.

so thanks for that post i guess
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Solace » Dec 19th, '08, 01:55

Boston wrote:i never said they werent entitled to their opinion now did i?

i asked a simple question on HOW.

so thanks for that post i guess

Your welcome.
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 19th, '08, 20:39

that rain deer line was pretty smart, dude flow was fuked up
good for wat its worth,lol
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Re: A Rain Matrix Christmas

Postby James R. » Dec 20th, '08, 00:43

Flow was off. But I liked it. Themed drops are always fun. And seeing as how it's just a Christmas Key-Up you can't be too mad. Good job.
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