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Welcome To My Nightmare

Postby Inzanity » Nov 24th, '05, 22:21

I got alot on my mind//
my nightmares getting outta prison, 5 years thats not alot of time//
I guess the law systems fucked up cause theres alot of crime//
thats not being taking care of//
in the right manna//
how can a man abuse 7 children//
and get off 5 years later like nothing happen dam I wish I could kill him//
meanwhile theres people in prison for crimes they didn't even do//
if only the world even knew//
how fucked up Americas law system is//
I just wish there was something I could do to fix the shit//

So welcome to my nightmare//
y can't people see the truth when it's right there//
in front of there eyes//
crooked cops, crooked lawers, crooked judges, are law system is full lies//

"Do u swear to tell the whole truth and nothing but the truth so help u God" "I Do"//
thats wat they say in the court but I'd like to see the law swear to tell the truth and nothing but the truth cause I'm sick of being lied to//
but it's not just the law system it's the whole country thats crooked//
open ur eyes look it//
theres children dieing cause of starvation//
pregnant women smoking crack so not only are there baby's born addicted but their also born with slight cases of retardation//
mothers and fathers//
to doped up on drugs to feed their sons and daughters//
parents allowing there children to get raped so they can get their drugs//
innocent children being killed in drive by shootings done by thugs//
but of course our president dosen't give 2 fucks//

So welcome to my nightmare//
y can't people see the truth when it's right there//
in front of there eyes//
crooked cops, crooked lawers, crooked judges, are law system is full lies//

people living in the steets//
single teenage mothers crying themselfs to sleep//
children going to bed with no food cause their family can't afford to eat//
and we're sending food to other countries wat about the people on American soil?//
Bush dosen't give a fuck about us he'd rather leave his Americans to boil//
and i can't believe the rest of the world has the nerve to believe Americans are spoiled//
are streets ain't paved with gold//
so don't believe all the things ur told//
cause outta all the countries in the world Americas the one with the most sin//
5 year old girls being raped by grown men//
Eminem told us to fight but come on Slim y bother? u know we won't win//

So welcome to my nightmare//
y can't people see the truth when it's right there//
in front of there eyes//
crooked cops, crooked lawers, crooked judges, are law system is full lies//
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Postby misa » Nov 25th, '05, 08:32

:'(
i love it ...... its really touchable
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Postby AspirinE » Nov 25th, '05, 12:33

woaaa

good shizzle :smoking:
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Postby shadypelkey » Nov 27th, '05, 01:27

yo, is this a chic writing this? or a guy?
it's pretty good yo, props

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Postby Inzanity » Nov 27th, '05, 02:11

shadypelkey wrote:yo, is this a chic writing this? or a guy?
it's pretty good yo, props

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Postby shadys_lady28 » Nov 27th, '05, 23:33

i like it!!! touches the heart
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Postby Trigger » Nov 28th, '05, 06:21

yo its good that ur a girl, not very many guys would go that far as u did.
good shit
pce!
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