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Postby Trigger » Dec 2nd, '05, 03:11

One fuked up day
(chorous)
(just talking)... yo, it happens to the best of us. good days, bad days.
ppl in ur face, pissin u off, u try to be polite
but they dont decrese there lips from flappin
this song and its the illest rappin (chorous)



Day 1: 7:00am
wakin up, its all good in my hood,
everything goin as good as it should
everything goin smooth (wat) bitch dats the full truth
next thing u know POOF,
bullet went right through my bullet proof,
vest there was no test,
went in and out of my chest


Day 1: 7:10am
Now im on the run,
risking my life, lettin loose wit my gun,
this thug life ain't all dat fun,
in games, half the time u feel all fuked up and strange
and the other half ur practicing ur skills at the shooting range.
days all fuked up now, im like, shit bud (wow)
so this foo thought he had me,
fuk this bitch, i'll pop off, show this pussy who's crazy




(chorous)
(just talking)... yo, it happens to the best of us. good days, bad days.
ppl in ur face, pissin u off, u try to be polite
but they dont decrese there lips from flappin
this song mixed emotios and its the illest rappin




Day 1: 2:oopm
after the heat of the chase, i washed up and cleaned my face
so the fuking po po's wont find a trace, at my place,
trying to make a fuking case outta shit dat ain't real,
my automobile, is the shit that u can't steal,if tried u wont feel
real, when i hit u wit the steel, loosing all 6 senses
except 4 touch and feel,
the day is finally looking bright (Aight)
i might actually get a good sleep tonight



Day1:10:00pm
chillin wit my boyz, doin the finishing touches to r new toyz
getting ready to deployyyy, the bombs dat will go off in detrooooy
(window shattering)FUK BOYZ, STRAP
prepare to mess shit up, get fuked up, we'll hola to them when r shit up
we smash through the door, to the entrance to the liquor store
we laid low, all of us basically Huggin the floor
"a yo bro", "this shit is such a bore "
"phhhh, not as bad as when i was getting head from this Whore"



Day2:1:00am
we prepare up r glocks, ready to roll up there blocks
we got plenty in stock
they have no clue, wat we do, will leave them on there knees
"yo, we srry, 4 whatever we did to u
"FUK YA'LL" we unleash r crome,
dis wat u get when u run up my home
leave pieces of ur body laying seperate from each other, all alone
ends up in the past couple of hours,
the shit i produced got me a couple of fans,
wat u plan, i can expand,
then witstand, then when all is said and done i will out plan
i'll use word not even the smartest FUK(wooo) wont even understand.


(chorous)
(just talking)... yo, it happens to the best of us. good days, bad days.
ppl in ur face, pissin u off, u try to be polite
but they dont decrese there lips from flappin
this song mixed emotios and its the illest rappin

YEAH, DIS IS Trigger
OWNING YA'LL SHIT AND YA'LL KNOW IT
MY BOUYZ DONT FUK AROUND, U FUKED UP CLOWN
WE SLAP U AROUND, SMASH UR FACE CONSTANTLY TO THE GROUND

PEACE YO!

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Growin up

(chorus)
a yo, growin up wit da buzz, feelin cold, just cuz
thanking god there is one personin this world u can truzz
he got my back, i got his, word da biz, dats just how it iz
when we pull the triggaz, to ya'll player haterz, stay the fuk oput my biz
i thank the lord, 4 allowing me to live a life wit out cutting the cord
this life is baseically a double edge sword
only one man i dont despite
dats my man jesus crist, he tells me wrong from right
i loose my sight, and u'd think im the one dat does all the rap fights
hes the one that does all the shit i right
see when i bark, im in the dark, i'll ignite spark



goin to scoo, fruntin, thinking i waz coo, keepin my shit tight
i have weak left, but a nice right, dat will fuk u up 4 the rest of the night
spit my grime, aka my rymes, watz inside is my prim
the only secret i hide, is one thing bitch(wat?) my pride
everyone whispering gossip,
ya'll betta watch it, i leave u ending up wit a fat lip
i'll bust ya'll shit, dont beleave it, test it
i hear one peep, i'll hit u up side the head
put u in a deep sleep,
when i creap, i shuffle my feat,
so quick , so neat
then one day,just chillin, and out of the blue
this kid frunted me,i fuked him up he had no idea wat to do

(chorus)
a yo, growin up wit da buzz, feelin cold, just cuz
thanking god there is one personin this world u can truzz
he got my back, i got his, word da biz, dats just how it iz
when we pull the triggaz, to ya'll niggaz, stay the fuk oput my biz
i thank the lord, 4 allowing me to live a life wit out cutting the cord
this life is baseically a double edge sword
only one man i dont despite
dats my man jesus crist, he tells me wrong from right
i loose my sight, and u'd think im the one dat does all the rap fights
hes the one that does all the shit i right
see when i bark, im in the dark, i'll ignite spark(jesus crist, u my man, ight)



couple hours down the road, me and him talked like we had r own code
now there is two ppl in my life, dat arent kife
now me and him we loyal to the game
we basically just doin it 4 da fame
if we fuk up(waaa)we'll 4 show feel the shame
if we make no money,ud better maintain, this shit in ur brain,
we WILL obtain dat nice chain
finishing u off by sliceing, dicing, ur neck, ya'll better bet,
we own this set
wat we do, it could be hard to grasp, to hard to last
cant stand,
the dizziness of not being the man, not able to see ur own hand
than, dats the cue for when i met my main friend

(chorus)

a yo, growin up wit da buzz, feelin cold, just cuz
thanking god there is one personin this world u can truzz
he got my back, i got his, word da biz, dats just how it i
when we pull the triggaz, to ya'll niggaz, stay the fuk oput my biz
i thank the lord, 4 allowing me to live a life wit out cutting the cord
this life is baseically a double edge sword
only one man i dont despite
dats my man jesus crist, he tells me wrong from right
i loose my sight, and u'd think im the one dat does all the rap fights
hes the one that does all the shit i right
see when i bark, im in the dark, i'll ignite spark(jesus crist, u my man, ight)
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tHE eND oF lAUGH
(chorus)

As i stand here with a pillow over my face, hold my breath,
i pray to god that there is life after death.(wooow)
cuz if i end up dieing and there aint, i'll try to restaint,
myself from ending up from the resault of no oxygen then faint.
i'd stand there debating, all the waiting,
at the door preparing myself to meet satin.
lord opoligies for thinking this way,
if my life continues to play this way,
shit,i'll think of another way to kill myself some other day(yeah)

verse 1

Growin up livin on the shallow end of the pool,
i know that for a fact my ma raised no fool,
nuttins goin my way,even the shit goin down at school aint cool
i think for most my life i was on wellfare,
it aint fare, i cant declare, wither or not what kinda clothes i wanna wear.
the gifts i recieve, ud best beleave,
i take it up to my room and cry, were i cat be seen
cuz i goota keep hold of my pride,
keep all my feelings, bukcle em all inside,
yeah, 4 show i tried to open up, thats when it all stated to colapse,
i got pissed and tried to grasp, i began to grasp, my breath wouldnt last.


(chorus)
As i stand here with a pillow over my face, hold my breath,
i pray to god that there is life after death.
cuz if i end up dieing and there aint, i'll try to restaint,
myself from ending up from the resault of no oxygen then faint.
i'd stand there debating, all the waiting,
at the door preparing myself to meet satin.(what)
lord opoligies for thinking this way,
if my life continues to play this way,
shit,i'll think of another way to kill myself some other day

verse 2
Even my family is all fuked up, we all goin r sepreat ways,
there r the occational days, were we all ight,
but then there r the days i dispight, night after night, a constint fight
one of this days i just might, let loose, pop off put us all to sleep
"good night", hold'em close to me were i can keep'em,
be there when they're sleepin
somedays when its cold,
and im all alone i wish there was somone i could hold,
then again, i am a man, there r some things that i have to witstand,
but i wish there was someone willing to be there for a helping hand,
got a couple of buddies who r loyal to the game,
but we all know it's just in r brain
when its rainin, i be prayin god be by my side just waitin,
stand there watchin as i take the pain, im recieavin by satin(ight)
i'll stand there without a sign fear, yeah sure u might see a tear,
fuk, i dont care, do u see anyone around here(fukin queer)

(chorus)
As i stand here with a pillow over my face, hold my breath,
i pray to god that there is life after death.
cuz if i end up dieing and there aint, i'll try to restaint,
myself from ending up from the resault of no oxygen then faint.
i'd stand there debating, all the waiting,
at the door preparing myself to meet satin.
lord opoligies for thinking this way,
if my life continues to play this way,
shit,i'll think of another way to kill myself some other day

verse 3

so here i am in this room all alone,
i pace myself as i begin to romewonderin ither or not to release some crome,
pierce my flesh like it was a piece of stiraphone.
so close to death my life flashes before my eyez,
as i think, i start to realize, all the ppl i hurt for tellin all those liez
life aint all good in this world, ppl die everyday, world continus to truwl
i think this song will make ppl think of me,
and what i grew up would finally consume me,
that will truly be, the biggiest possibilty

(chorus)
As i stand here with a pillow over my face, hold my breath,
i pray to god that there is life after death.
cuz if i end up dieing and there aint, i'll try to restaint,
myself from ending up from the resault of no oxygen then faint.
i'd stand there debating, all the waiting,
at the door preparing myself to meet satin.
lord opoligies for thinking this way,
if my life continues to play this way,
shit,i'll think of another way to kill myself some other day


YEAH!! I HOPE YA'LL GOT THE JIST OF IT
LIFE AINT ALL FUN'EN GAMES IGHT!
LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLIEST 4 SHOW
JUST DONT LET NE OF YA'LL REALL FEELINS



YEAH !
IM OUT


(LAUGHTER)

Some of it may not make sence, im one tired fuk right now!!!
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Postby Vettori » Dec 2nd, '05, 03:49

Well That was pretty good, Keep it up, My favourite lines from the first song was "Quote...Day 1: 2:oopm
after the heat of the chase, i washed up and cleaned my face
so the fuking po po's wont find a trace, at my place,
trying to make a fuking case outta shit dat ain't real,
my automobile, is the shit that u can't steal,if tried u wont feel
real, when i hit u wit the steel, loosing all 6 senses
except 4 touch and feel,
the day is finally looking bright (Aight)
i might actually get a good sleep tonight...Unquote"

Keep it Up, "Welcome To TR" :D

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Postby Trigger » Dec 2nd, '05, 03:55

Thx yo, oh and everything that was said on this punk site :whistle: jk jk but NWhoo was clearly in anger i'd tell andrew but he aint on so know u know
keep stayin active :D welcome to tr
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Postby Trigger » Dec 2nd, '05, 03:59

thx, i was bored outta my mind, i'd be surprised if som1 acurally read of of em
but thx again Alyssa
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Postby Cartman » Dec 3rd, '05, 09:28

Good work man i liked it!
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Postby misa » Dec 3rd, '05, 10:13

i liked them esp. the end of laugh i'll save it if u dont mind
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Postby Trigger » Dec 4th, '05, 00:11

heyy thx Cartman :D and wat do u mean u'll save it? :whistle: lol
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