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V-Dog - S.A.N.T.A.N.A. Remix (50 Cent Diss) (AUDIO)

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 3rd, '05, 19:30

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V-Dogs New Shit!!!! tell me what you think
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 3rd, '05, 19:39

i dint really liek it to be honest, it was too forced and stuttery and u jus didnt seem comfortable spittin

props for the effort keep doin your thing
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 3rd, '05, 19:40

HAYZI wrote:i dint really liek it to be honest, it was too forced and stuttery and u jus didnt seem comfortable spittin

props for the effort keep doin your thing


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Postby $0 R3@L » Dec 3rd, '05, 19:43

imma speak the truth...

your vocals were a lil flat wen put against the beat.Half the lyrics and ideas against g unit have been adapted from original rappers lyrics.

apart from that i actually think it was ok.Anyone with the balls to put up a audio deserves a props...
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 3rd, '05, 19:44

$0 R3@L wrote:imma speak the truth...

your vocals were a lil flat wen put against the beat.Half the lyrics and ideas against g unit have been adapted from original rappers lyrics.

apart from that i actually think it was ok.Anyone with the balls to put up a audio deserves a props...


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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 3rd, '05, 20:39

g_killa wrote:it was good like all tracks could be improved but relly wat real said


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Postby Coccoa » Dec 4th, '05, 00:00

Less than zero.

Better go back where u was and shut up, aint for this shit.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Dec 4th, '05, 00:13

i liked it. i think i run new your was done better but this was still good. you should post some more of your songs up. if you have any other ones
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 4th, '05, 01:34

Em_Young wrote:Less than zero.

Better go back where u was and shut up, aint for this shit.



yo shut the fuck up u fuckin hater, why u poppin more shit for nigga
haha stop backin up g-unit nigga, u just didnt like this shit cuz u a groupie
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Postby Shadyluva » Dec 4th, '05, 01:38

V-DogDaMenace wrote:
Em_Young wrote:Less than zero.

Better go back where u was and shut up, aint for this shit.



yo shut the fuck up u fuckin hater, why u poppin more shit for *****
haha stop backin up g-unit *****, u just didnt like this shit cuz u a groupie


y r u 2 beefin again????
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 4th, '05, 01:40

Shadyluva wrote:
V-DogDaMenace wrote:
Em_Young wrote:Less than zero.

Better go back where u was and shut up, aint for this shit.



yo shut the fuck up u fuckin hater, why u poppin more shit for *****
haha stop backin up g-unit *****, u just didnt like this shit cuz u a groupie


y r u 2 beefin again????


dont ask me, ask em young, he the 1 dat started this shit again
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 4th, '05, 14:36

haha stop backin up g-unit *****, u just didnt like this shit cuz u a groupie



lmao, u jus made a diss to gunit backin up game and your callinn him a groupie :p
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Postby Vettori » Dec 4th, '05, 16:59

I liked it man, That was hot, I Like Your voice for it....Hmmm...The only thing i would say is speed it up a bit, But i ain't gonna Be a critic, Nice work man :D....Props

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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 4th, '05, 21:31

HAYZI wrote:
haha stop backin up g-unit *****, u just didnt like this shit cuz u a groupie



lmao, u jus made a diss to gunit backin up game and your callinn him a groupie :p



lol, true, but im not on game's dick like em young is on g-units, i dont give a fuck if sum1 disses game in this site, em young is a REAL groupie
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 4th, '05, 23:46

You just need me to get your ass in Brooklyn puta, dont you?

Let's start with the no1 fact:

You're in New York. And you rep a fag from Compton? As if your own fucking city never gave u music. You dont like G-Unit fine. But spitting on a New York rapper and worship a West Coast bitch is more than irritating cabron.

Second thing is....

Who the fuck you think you are, dissing 50 on wax. Who are you? Who knows about you? Are you Jigga? Nas? Wu? Cypress? Mobb? Snoop? If you aint one of them you cant diss 50. 50 will always be 50. The well known 50. The rapper 50. The actor 50, the businessman 50, the playboy 50 the whatever 50. Same with all the rappers i mentioned before. They are people with real lives and real game and they reached the top and now they enjoy what they achieved.

You on the other hand, you're a zero. You are an unknown person, between millions of unknown people. You was born unknown, you live unknown and you gon die uknown and i doubt that your mom's gon cry. That's what you are. You are nuffin. Not even a big nuffin. Not even important-unimportant. You're the person next door. Similar to everyone else out there and no one recognises you except your family. It's how life is.

So besides the fact that u making disses towards 50 is more than waste of time, besides the fact you killing this art we call "music", besides all this shit....lemme ask you.

Why the fuck you even bother living? Kill yourself, spare those FEW to NONE people who know you from this "Chinese B-Movie"-like nightmare that's known in this forum as....V-DogDaMenace.
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