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Recognition- Faith (P.M.T) Audio

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 01:54

Now like i said i have like the shittiest Recording setup, and like, No patience right now, so i just did this, I hope you like, it...I know it's not 100% clear....And i no i fucked up alot....But have fun.....I'm ready to get some Bad replys :P

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Heres lyrics

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 01:59

As solid as ground you hold, Plus the crack you smoke,
It's holdin no bars against the bitch you Ropped and choked,
as much as she deserved it,It's perfect yo,
This shit can have you impounded by the government so,
what have you got planned next to escape from this place,,
your too heat Your gonna have to get a new face, or replace ,
Your life has been Scraped into the gutterless jaws,
and All you have Left are the Past and government laws,
Holdin you Back, when you get caught, with the 12 bullets they shot,
Is a body part worth the cost
Or the amount of time youll spend under Criminal watch,
I Hate to break it to yu Buddy, But Nobodys My boss,
It's like a Chain reaction, Only Lockin you up,
You too invisible, for anybody to give a fuck, It's like a line of luck,
Everyone is invisible too,
You can't phase a Rap artist who spits only the truth...
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Postby $0 R3@L » Dec 6th, '05, 02:02

no comment :zipped:
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yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
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W/e

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 02:06

Liek i said...I'm using a very shitty recording peace of shit, You can make fun, Boo or w/e, But...It don't matter to me, at least I made an attempt.....
You can come on this site, and critisise all the fuck you want....But I just dont care...LMFAO,...See i aint the type of person who Starts beef over your comment....I'm glad you guys "Liked" it

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Lmfao

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 02:10

No I aint gettin rid of "Guys" cause it Goes to all the people who don't liek it, I never said you said anything, But again...I had shitty recorder...At least i had fun with it....LMFAO...I just no that theres gonna be a bunch of fuckin critics, Just gettin ready to jump on my dick, and say shit.....But i dont beef over somthin yu dont like

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Wow

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 02:15

You see when i put "Guys" It is reffering to all the other people taht are going to post up, that this was shit,...If i said somthing like, G-Killa, and So Real, As in being direct...Then sure get up all and personal about it....But untill then, Don't fuckin worry about it...If you don't like it, and don't like me, Don't post back here...Do what yu do best...Understood ?
It's a simple task

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Postby Trigger » Dec 6th, '05, 02:19

well i dont know if i could do better or not cause i dont have a mic..can't afford it, so faith, thx 4 atlest tryin
welcome to tr :p stay active
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Lmfao

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 02:20

I don't have No problems with anyone on this Forum, and sure we was talkin, I thought we were cool too, and to this minute i still think were alright, Just what you put I didnt really understand as well, so we both misunderstood shit, Differances solved ?
My apologies, Just usually when i have the balls to put summin of such crap quality, I don't expect to get just nailed into the ground, With remarks, Where i actually told people the reason why its bad

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Postby Trigger » Dec 6th, '05, 02:33

that was some pretty kool shit that just went down right here, brings a tear to my eye :'(
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Postby Trigger » Dec 6th, '05, 02:38

:'( wait yo sniff sniff :'(
alone again
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lol

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 02:48

Try to keep some space here for people to make fun and Putdown my lil spit, Make a section in creative writing called ...Random shit to talk about lol, Sorry for being so mean and ruining ur fun :wave:

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Postby Trigger » Dec 6th, '05, 03:05

im wit killa on this one u do stink :D
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Postby Trigger » Dec 6th, '05, 03:51

hmmm i wounder why is soOoO quite all of a sudden, know that moi, and killa aint talkin :smoking:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Dec 6th, '05, 04:36

I liked it. It was better than osme of the others posted. you could actually understand yours and it was good quality. if you keep trying you'll eventually be great at audios. we know you got the rhymes to make them you just have to take the time to make them. keep up the good work.
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I still rap better than you.

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Nice

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '05, 05:08

Thanx for the compliments, My buddy just offered to let me use his actual studio, so....Over some time ill have better shit, I thank u lots for ur honest opinion...really best one ive gotten, Some people just can't see something good, even when i describe, what i had to use to make it LMAO....Peace Bro

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