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Two sample tracks (Audio) ..Check it Out!

Postby SilverAthlon » Dec 6th, '05, 08:29

Hey check out these two tracks i made and let me know wat y'all think!
The beats arent mine...but the lyrics are...

http://members.optusnet.com.au/seshan/rap2.mp3

http://members.optusnet.com.au/seshan/BigMe.mp3

ENJOY!
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Postby xariuss » Dec 6th, '05, 08:34

the 2nd one was better, but i still didn't like them very much... couldnt hear ur voice propley.. abit to much stutterin
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Postby SilverAthlon » Dec 6th, '05, 11:34

xariuss wrote:the 2nd one was better, but i still didn't like them very much... couldnt hear ur voice propley.. abit to much stutterin


thanx 4 da comments dude...yea the mic was pretty crap so i guess my voice wasnt all dat loud....
guess i need more practise!
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Postby xariuss » Dec 6th, '05, 12:16

hehe man, from evrything u do youll only improve aye, i just did a song to.. its in "creative writing" called "sad at the end" have a listen and tell me what you think

edit"" and come to think when listening to the 2nd one carefully..it's actually really good, nice work man
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