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Re: ThEsE piLLs (Will Return Feedback)

Postby Noeezy » Jul 9th, '09, 21:08

nice, my fav verse was 2nd
I dont know if its just me but it kinda sounds like Ems stuff, otherwise its pretty good though :y:

feed mine :)
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Re: ThEsE piLLs (Will Return Feedback)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 9th, '09, 21:43

it's ok, some good lines
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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