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Lost all respect

Postby Trigger » Dec 29th, '05, 06:04

i lost all respect for you
fuking piece of shit ur a fool
no dought u aint the sharpest tool
fucking recycable urensile
ur fucking crazed and mental
fucking girl, always over emtoinal
man i coulda lifted u like a 5lb weight
in this state, of mind i could feed u my fist
im way past pist, fukin flex, and snap my wrist
im holding bak only cause use family
u can't stand me, fuk, dissown me
from this shitty family tree
i'll bounce to a new city, just another possibility
fuk i wish i let these fukin fist fly
mutha fuka put u in a coma and die
i don't lie, when i'm in this state
nuttin right now can come close to relate
it ain't no real debate
that for ur punk ass death is ur only fate
fukin older bro
u act like u lived ur life livin off dope
shit i can only pray and fukin hope
that u fukin end up bumping heads wit da pope
cause ur head will be focused in the crossehares of my scope
fukin pull my pressure sensitive trigger
shit, couple more times make u die quicker
down another bottle of liqour, shit gets cold in the winter
u cheap mutha fuka arech u
come up from behind cause ur a pussy
man it's almost like u know im thirsty
to see u bleed
u nead to go bak and re-read
the mutha fuking sighns
i'll hang u up like a fukin picture
sure, i'll piss on it first add a lil contour
add a lil powder, to bring out the power
of the picture perfect image of me tuning u out
no dought, even with or without
me fukin blazing mad shit outta that tree
my anger is the key, of lettin u see
ur last and 4 sho very bloody
final destiny

i'm out


fukin kid, older bro my fukin ass. i lost all rrespect 4 u. fuk, im supoose to look up to u?. if nething, i look down to u, u small lil pussy, fuking fight me, no need to wait 4 me to turn my bak then attack. Fight me face to face, like a muth fukin man

ur dissowned
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 00:18

I stopped reading after the third line. its nothing but "fuck" and typos.
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Postby Trigger » Dec 30th, '05, 00:30

DragonzEdge wrote:I stopped reading after the third line. its nothing but "fuck" and typos.

heyy, i respect that, have u wroten nething, i'd love to read urs, then share u my opinion
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 06:32

....say what?
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Postby ShadyRox » Dec 30th, '05, 06:46

DragonzEdge wrote:I stopped reading after the third line. its nothing but "fuck" and typos.

lol how rude... :unsure:
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Postby ShadyRox » Dec 30th, '05, 06:52

anyways...Trigger, u wrote this? U MUST be going through SOME shit...
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 06:56

you mean you don't get tired reading the same words over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over?
I bet you skipped to this sentence after the 2nd over didn't you?
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Postby Trigger » Dec 30th, '05, 08:38

DragonzEdge wrote:you mean you don't get tired reading the same words over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over?
I bet you skipped to this sentence after the 2nd over didn't you?

lmfao thx 4 the laugh seriously i acrurally read all of em
or and shadyrox, ya i've been throu a lot of b.s and thx 4 the support lol
NEways dragonedge write summtin right now then, so i can see wat ur like

o and one more thing i wrote this song in anger, so all the swearing brought most of it out 4 me
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 11:06

I dont spit shit like that when my fuse goes out
i just start writing, man, i dont scream or shout
saying fuck every sentence doesnt solve a thing
shit gets annoying and it wont have no flow
expand your vocabulary so your intellect will show
some substance to your rhyme wont hurt at all
unless you illiterate then its your downfall
the words i use, i use it to fuck your mind
better yet, i use it to fuck your mind body and soul
you cant stop my lyrical flow as it destroys ya soul
it just wont happen you cant mess wit it
it sucks your mind out like babies suck tits
putting your mind in a fuckin zombie like state
corroding your mind at an alarming rate
i aint no sucka MC, i destroy the mic
I'm like private jackson, i got you in my sight
my verbal bullets gives me one shot one kill
burn the stage like a desert, so you know its real
you think you are lyrically enough to wear the crown
ill take you down with the mic at the speed of sound
dont get mad, be glad your flow was burned by the king
my lyrical bullets kill so fast, your ears wont feel a thing
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Postby ShadyRox » Dec 31st, '05, 06:58

DragonzEdge wrote:you mean you don't get tired reading the same words over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over?
I bet you skipped to this sentence after the 2nd over didn't you?


Anyways Dragon...I *DID* read all of the 'over an over again's'
Sometimes you gotta open up because when you wanna write something and you want it published, it's ok...It's called 'feelings' Dragon, and I'm sure u have some too. Trigger, you have Freedom of Speech, and brush off all the haters :). No hate Dragon, just my opinion. We're cool right?

Oh, and u both have talent...dont fight over a dumb reason, peace ya'll :smoking: ;) Nobody in this world is better, do you understand? But
if you wanna fight, then take it like a man....lmao...im no rapper but that just cam outta me :p
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Postby ShadyRox » Dec 31st, '05, 20:59

g_killa wrote:looks like theres a new contender in the house


Me? Lmfao.... :happy:
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 31st, '05, 21:27

Nobody in this world is better, do you understand?


if noone is better than one another, then why do we have competitions, olympics and other stuff?

why are some people richer than other people?
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Postby ShadyRox » Jan 2nd, '06, 06:12

why are some people richer than other people?

cuz they succed in life, dont mean that their better.
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jan 2nd, '06, 13:00

it is because they are better, that they succeed. if your theory is true then why are there homeless? if homeless people are equal with everyone, why are they living in a cardboard box begging for money?
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