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Postby shadypelkey » Jun 8th, '05, 00:41

back and forth as we set up this obsticle course
making it worth your life and shit...
for whats your life's worth, it's gonna be breezy for us
but hard as fuck for you, shit kid you lose
to bad, the screw in ya head just got unscrewed
cockin back on that 44, splittin you up in ya forhead
blood spread all over this new swade red pull back
for that, i'll take ya sack slap it on the counter
cockin back on the sludge hammer, I never did it
it was gravity, the shit that pulls down, in your case a tragety
now i got little sluts swimmin around on my counter top
like they in a race but no one's winning, brushin them off wit a cloth
catch you sobbing in the corner jackin off, knock it off
grabs the soft end of a spatchala can, squeezes it tight in my hand
slashes at your brain, cuts a main vien, fuck this shits insane
i need to get away, smashes a can of whisky on tha floor
ran away, throws a match near the door
sittin back and just hoping it catches, blowin you to fragments
laugh roll you and smoke your ashes...
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Postby Rapsoldier101 » Jul 9th, '05, 01:02

you stole the:
sittin back and just hoping it catches, blowin you to fragments
laugh roll you and smoke your ashes...

from eminem in hellbound
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Postby B.A.D. » Jul 9th, '05, 06:11

BITTER!!!
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Postby gracedesign » Jul 13th, '05, 01:34

e to the l to da a to e k,
dont care wat ya say ,
diss ja be gay.

got no rhymes go no flow,
fu:*k he mom gud,
but hell she slow,

i threw her on dee bed
she said lets go
so i jumped right in
and tore at thee hoe
dont laugh yall know
ill fu*k any bitch HEY even a hoe!
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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 10th, '05, 00:48

yea it is shit, but who cares?
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