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Postby Shady666 » Jul 21st, '05, 19:25

yo all i hear here is battle and beef
seems like one tattle after grief
man im comin to take you guys to yo hearse
see which one is the first who dies, kills there verse
leaves the game and runs for courage and to be wise
man im fame and guns are strange im encoraged to be a surprise
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Postby Shady666 » Jul 21st, '05, 19:26

shit forgot this was a battle rhyme
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Postby Shady666 » Jul 21st, '05, 19:36

ok who is my next victim for my next account of homicide
hey you come here imma kill you with my text count the lines
im comin to bury your bodies cuz i killed your ass stud
im forced to carry your bodies cuz i spilled you fukin blood
my rhymes made you dump your guts and quit rappin
my lines invade causes jump and cuts and permits sscrapping
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Postby Karma » Jul 21st, '05, 22:37

Im The Chief Cuz No One Feelen 666 Like Christians With Belifs
Ya Frail! Fucken Wif Me I'll Make You Watch Ya Back Like Konvicts In Jail
Like Men In Porn Movies My Rhymes I'll Fuck This Slut, Now WHAT!
Im Icen~You~Chumps Stacken Each Of Your All's Limbs~Into~Lumps
A Gun You Can't Even Hold It Son
So Face It You Ain't Fucken With Me Like A Devoted-Nun
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Postby B.A.D. » Jul 22nd, '05, 01:08

ayo Rapsoldier and Hayzi...

Get on my level and I will reply... so keep em commin....
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 22nd, '05, 05:02

30-3 im in your town im tha sharpshooter
wiv a semi-automatic on back of a scooter
yo and fuck a ski mask or a balaclava
i got clown mask on for lack of the laughter (<^this rhmes in english)
called me back in the action wanna go back in to traction?
thought my rhyme end page 4 closed it up like your eyes when i blacked 'em


yo 30-3 its a 6 line limit bruv :evil: n i cant b replyin to these excesively long boring rhymes (LOL) it takes too long
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Postby Karma » Jul 22nd, '05, 15:35

Im gonna merk you give me a sec


You Knowen Im-Tight, Me Da Best Kid Throw-Up-The-White, I'll Own-This-Bitch Because One Punch Is A Sure-Ender/Surrender Like Coke Heads On-The-Strip
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 22nd, '05, 20:36

da fuck was that? you should be on your guard like with no cup in bat,
and fuck your rap dont even wanna-no-why-you suck so bad
you can just fuck off and suck my 'nads
you wack rappin fool heading for a backslapping of the back of your stool
im a slap happy dude in one hell of an unhappy mood
and if i happen to move you better not flinch, you better be-ready-to bust-a-move


had to edit thought i had 6 lines only had 5
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Postby B.A.D. » Jul 26th, '05, 06:30

Who was that??... ayo

Karma you good, you showed it on your first
Hayzi neva done what you could do in a two line verse
this is a straight 2 bar punch, I'm eatin u for lunch
And I don't gotta move next ta you ta kill u in a punch

^^^this was weak, lazy fucka you don't worth any more than this
stop replying, I ain't gon reply till you really make a good bar
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Postby HAYZI » Jul 26th, '05, 06:50

you talkin to me about weak lazy fucka?
what the fuck was that? 'ill eat you for lunch'
'kill u in a punch' fuckin darjan was better than that!
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 28th, '05, 21:00

:lol: well, if you say so... :lol:
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Postby 4D » Jul 29th, '05, 15:59

DARJAN333 wrote::lol: well, if you say so... :lol:


Darjan you too stoopid to realise that was a bigger diss to you than 30? :lol:
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Postby Darjan333 » Jul 29th, '05, 22:11

I know.Maybe i am stupid,but you are dissed more than i have been ever!
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Postby 4D » Jul 31st, '05, 09:14

DARJAN333 wrote:I know.Maybe i am stupid,but you are dissed more than i have been ever!


Anyone who dissed me, got if back tenfold. Nobody beat me yet! Check out the battles!
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Postby Vettori » Aug 21st, '05, 18:03

Darjan you don't no the first thing about being dissed,
But dissed aint nothing compared to 2 fists,
Take a swing at me, Physically or lyrically,ill leave you a hit
And not the kinda hit when you get a record deal,
The kind where your wounds and scars will not heal,
the kind where you takin needles to try and peel,
out the steel, that i engraved that i paved, in your face,
Now you like like Marilyn manson while he's singin on the stage,
Now don't take this harsh, I'm just a begginer,
But i think it's safe to say that in this diss im the winner.

"Faith"
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