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Postby SoniK » Jan 6th, '06, 22:28

ladies and gentleman before u leave
kiss the one u love goodbye cuz u may never return
and wen u lyin ther u'll beg beleif
as the fire in ur heart burns
u neva got to tell them how much u luved them
u neva got one lst squeeze to hug em
u neva got to tell em jus how much they mean to u
u neva tld em how she wit u was lyk a team wit u
u neva did, and now u neva will as ur last heart beats come
u realise the bullshit u said and what u done
cud hav been rectified, now u lyin, senses electrified
though ur motionless, not emotionless
ur brains workin mor than it ever has
u can see heaven, but u cnt move ur hands
ur soul leaves ur flesh as u realise ur moving ON
and u realise u never know what u got...until it's gone

peace
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Postby Vettori » Jan 7th, '06, 00:41

That sounds deep, somethin bad happen bro..?
Well Head up, Straighten up lil soldia
Just by the way it sounds, It's sad yo, Take it ez

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Postby Inzanity » Jan 7th, '06, 01:55

yea that was sad alot of emotion in it I like it
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Postby SoniK » Jan 7th, '06, 01:55

nah man, nuthin bad happens im jus sayin....u never no? hu knws which one of us gna be here tomoro?
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