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my final goodbye

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my final goodbye

Postby hottone123 » Jan 18th, '06, 02:57

Well this is my final goodbye
i promise u that
i tryed so hard
but i couldn't make it last
you left me here all alone
in this cold world
i have no friends
no one to love
no one to confront
with the way i am feeling
no one to lend a helping hand when times get bad
but don't worry the pain isn't going to last for much longer
for i will be gone within a hour
for she done this to me
her lies have ripped me apart
the lies she told you
the lies that stole our love
she has made my life hell an for that she shell pay
for this is not a suicide
this is a murder
i was Rodd from my love
then Rodd from my life
so this shell be my final goodbye
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Postby Rae » Feb 22nd, '06, 00:21

aw... that was some mad shit right there! DEEP! i hope you never really felt that way homie!
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Postby Ivy » Feb 22nd, '06, 00:23

:shocked: Remind me not to piss you off :whistle: Just playing...nice shit :happy: :8)
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby ayla » Feb 22nd, '06, 01:58

that's deep nice read, well done :D
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