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Postby EmFan4Life » Jan 18th, '06, 03:09

ok dont laugh at me cuz im not good at this kinda stuff lol
i have actually said this poem on the radio so yeah lol
so DONT LAUGH AT IT!!! :happy:

i saw a duck
it took 20 bucks
i said "hey duck
dude u suck!"
and then that duck
said thats ur luck
so then i got that duck
put it in my truck
it started to cluck
but i kno that ducks
dont really cluck
but thats just my luck
then i got my bucks
and for that duck
I HIT HIM WITH MY TRUCK!
HAHA! STUPID DUCK!
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Postby Nick419 » Jan 18th, '06, 04:36

That was the most beautiful poem i ever heard :'(
RIP Big proof~Broken hearted, my soul's like a open target
And I'm ready to leave Earth
You step to my death next year on my T-shirt
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jan 18th, '06, 04:39

i'm sorry but i couldn't help laughing while reading the poem. poor duck lol
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Postby EmFan4Life » Jan 18th, '06, 21:42

thanks...that took me a long time to rhyme and make it sound right but i finally got it to sound perfect :happy:
Ever stop to think, and forget to start again?
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Postby Ivy » Jan 18th, '06, 21:45

I really liked it, but I feel really sorry for that duck.lol.
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Postby shadys_lady28 » Jan 18th, '06, 23:15

brittany u r soo funny! I love it! :D
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Re: the duck lol

Postby AspirinE » Jan 19th, '06, 15:59

EmFan4Life wrote:ok dont laugh at me cuz im not good at this kinda stuff lol
i have actually said this poem on the radio so yeah lol
so DONT LAUGH AT IT!!! :happy:

i saw a duck
it took 20 bucks
i said "hey duck
dude u suck!"
and then that duck
said thats ur luck
so then i got that duck
put it in my truck
it started to cluck
but i kno that ducks
dont really cluck
but thats just my luck
then i got my bucks
and for that duck
I HIT HIM WITH MY TRUCK!
HAHA! STUPID DUCK!



*Imagines dre's deep cover beat*

hell yeah... will do
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cool

Postby hottone123 » Jan 20th, '06, 05:17

i loved it, was even better the 5th time i read it love ya girl
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Re: the duck lol

Postby Inzanity » Jan 20th, '06, 13:36

g_killa wrote:
AspirinE wrote:
EmFan4Life wrote:ok dont laugh at me cuz im not good at this kinda stuff lol
i have actually said this poem on the radio so yeah lol
so DONT LAUGH AT IT!!! :happy:

i saw a duck
it took 20 bucks
i said "hey duck
dude u suck!"
and then that duck
said thats ur luck
so then i got that duck
put it in my truck
it started to cluck
but i kno that ducks
dont really cluck
but thats just my luck
then i got my bucks
and for that duck
I HIT HIM WITH MY TRUCK!
HAHA! STUPID DUCK!



*Imagines dre's deep cover beat*

hell yeah... will do


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Lmao
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Postby Speech » Jan 20th, '06, 14:40

HAHAHAHA.....no im jokin...neva heard a girl spittin....sounds cute :wave:
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