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Rock-A-Bye Baby...

Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:22

Alright, here's another one of my versions of a little baby rhyme...all feedback welcome... :happy:

Rock-a-bye baby,
On the treetop,
When the wind blows
The cradle will rock;
When the bough breaks
The cradle will fall,
And down will come baby,
Cradle and all.
But momma will break her baby
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:24

:'( that is so sweet
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:27

I don't know :tounge2: It's the beginning part to the original song... :happy: So I can't answer that....so yeah...Thanks by the way for the comment EmptyPromises..glad you liked it...
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 13th, '06, 01:27

yer kinda not feelin the theme and the fact the first opening lines have been lifted from a 5 years olds nusery book :unsure:

the rest was cool though :flower:
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:29

That was the point...the first part was from the nursery rhyme....kinda like my Hush Little Baby one....that's how I start them out...I actually sing them to my little cousins and they go right to sleep..
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 13th, '06, 01:31

Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats class bro
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:32

LMAO.... :laughing:

But still...this is supposed to be sweet :'(
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:36

g_killa wrote:rock a bye baby in the treetop
your mother cant raise you she out suckin cock
shes a crack addict round on my block
shes got no money so shell suck u off


feelin that more




:laughing: yea g_killa that should be sung to every little kid
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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 13th, '06, 01:37

awww that's so sweet taylor :happy: and killa you runied the song lol :whistle:
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:37

Thanks for the comment MuNxMuN...I don't think guys understand the term or even the existence of the word sweet....
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:42

There goes my imagination...I could just picture Killa's song being sung to a little child by its mother....
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:44

I read it...but can you imagine the reaction of that little kid when his mother sung him that...that'd be priceless......
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:45

g_killa wrote:
taylorakatiggi wrote:There goes my imagination...I could just picture Killa's song being sung to a little child by its mother....


did u not read.....the mother is suckin dick lmao


yea talor she can't sing with her mouth full LMAO
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:46

Then how can she get the rest of the words out if her mouth is full of cock Killa???? Hmmm...say I can't read...
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:48

g_killa wrote:
EmptyPromises wrote:
g_killa wrote:
taylorakatiggi wrote:There goes my imagination...I could just picture Killa's song being sung to a little child by its mother....


did u not read.....the mother is suckin dick lmao


yea talor she can't sing with her mouth full LMAO



lmaof......and the baby is in a tree


yea thats one thing I never understood how the fuck did the baby get in the tree?
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