something i wrote

[mcmiked]

hey, im new here, and i thought i would post somethign i wrote a while back. Its kinda cheesy, but it was what was on my mind at the time. It was a freestyle i recorded, then typed out, i hope you guys like it

I cant beleive it happened,
No explaination, just happened,
I'd do anything to go back and,
Stop what ever happened in the past and,
What ever made her think this, was the best way to go,
Id prefer not to talk, then not to have her mine no more,
But i cant change it, I cant erase it,
I cant do shit, i dont know what cause it,
And i still dont know, and i never will,
theres a place in my heart, no one will fill,
Because hers, and hers only
Without knowing shes mine, i feel so lonely,
Just to see one last hug,
Just to have one last kiss,
Just to see that smile on her face, thats what i miss,
Just to hold her tight, For the rest of my life,
Thats all i want,
But u cant always have what u want,
Even if u try so hard to play your part,
Theres always a end, a end to the end,
And i even promise myself, i wouldnt fall in love again,
And i broke that promise, then i lost the girl,
The girl i would kill for to have in my world,
If dreams can come true,
Is there a chance if i only have one?
All I want is to be able to hold her,
All I want is her back, the one that i love,
Even just to have one last moment together,
That last moment, i would cherish forever,
I just wish when my phone rings, that its you calling,
Saying u wanna be together, Ill love you always

[mcmiked]

thanks, i almost doen a beat to it for an audio. I dont know when that will be done though

[mcmiked]

ya i got a bunch of better stuff to, alot more deeper things, but i'll post those some other time

[Inzanity]

That was so touchin'

[Ivy]

<<<<-------That's all I have to say...

[Shadyluva]

that was really deep
keep it up

[4D]

Very very good, emotional stuff!!

[mcmiked]

thanks