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Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 21st, '06, 08:05

im bonded like james
so you gon' die another day
thats what DarkMan X has come to say
but no fuckin way ima let this relay
b/c KDoG doesnt play now im off the chain

you talkin bout how we're all soft in our brains
so ima start to lay bodies down on the terrain so nothin remains but your dust n blood stains cuz no other option remains

yes I function insane cuz the junk has became a problem which has almost gotten away from outta my range

oh well, let the drama just hang on top of my name...

but who will follow n who will stay when I develop a flood gate for those who challenge what I brought to the game b/c a lot of you aint discovered the hostage I claim when my remarks come in to take a part n I aim on the target i frame b/c you are just so arcade I'm afraid...
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Postby Rae » Feb 22nd, '06, 00:17

nice ... 2 bad you cant put a beat in it if you know whatta mean. (that made no sense!)
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