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u could suck on both my nuts

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u could suck on both my nuts

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 26th, '06, 12:32

u could suck on both my nuts
but thats some homo stuff
i bet ya love havin polkadots
dont sweat when i rap my solo tough n battle souls because
ya can not shut your holes on up
and so ill do my best to sew em up
im ready for war, n whoever wore camouflauge on this board to sabatage
ima never forget who you are
am i the only dog who shows my roots, to rep my home, my block
illinois, the Rock at this postin spot?
well i guess ill put ya rest on lock to destroy ya taunts
ya best check your nuts, are ya a boy or not?
because youve left no trust
and ya should know 'that im just' after yall soldiers' blood
yes i want ur death to come
so ya got one chance to run
n can I judge ya acts like God?
i hold a cattle prod: the microphone i got
which would boil ya to the soil fa being unloyal ta
Kevin McCoy- or better known: KDoG
and if ya can't control our grudge
on the phone call your thugs or popos at 911
maybe even get ya lawyers on if ya want some fun
get ur wardrobes on for the court when its ordered up
until the oders gone
all your bullshit songs blow my long, bolder rod
while i surely come over ya with a full load of cum
its not sherbert dog but ya should slurp it up
go ahead, burp it up
but its my turn to burn ya up
i could be one of the immaturest dogs
or the Perfect son
ya'll are worthless scrubs
who could serve my lunch
but i prefer no such person's job who could convert in drugs into my internal bod'
other than murder squads from the works im on
and if ya disturb me while im takin a terd at the john
ima hurt ya like busta the day after n twist ya like its ur personal vietnam
cuz u nerds Ill bomb cuz we dont have any certain bond
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 27th, '06, 04:30

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