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some old battle verses that I freestyled

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some old battle verses that I freestyled

Postby Inzanity » Mar 8th, '06, 02:38

I'm da tip of the ice burg, I hit wit a nice verse, fuck a "kap gun" I'll slit wit a knife first, just like Eminem I walk into gun fights wit knives, and when I do emcee's run for they lives, They cry out for christ, but he don't hear dem, and fuck guns I don't fear dem, I'ma bout to make this Emcee's career end, u don't come close to my status, I'm the Herion ur the addic, u come here trying to cause some static, I'm capible of killing u wit a knife even when u got the automatic,

hey yo Makaveli's Deciple, steppin' to me say hi to my rifle, Just to let u know Makaveli ain't the Christ yo, askin' to battle me is like commitin' suicide, cause I'ma leave u like Jesus crucified, leaving u with no redemption no time for repenting, u gon' die faster then a homosexual at Christian convention, dawg keep in mind ur missin' contention, Theres no reason for u to call me out like that, I gotta worn u that my words burn like fire when I strike back, u think callin' me out defends me yo, I'ma destroy u faster then Eminem did to Benzino

I'ma leave u so nameless ur own fan's won't know you, and dawg u have to admit it's so true, I'ma murder u faster then Ted Bundy did those women in the 1970's, leavin' u wit nuttin but a bunch of fuckin' unclean memories, Of how every part of ur soul got devoured, cause' motha fuckas like u tend to be cowards, I'ma leave Makaveli's Deciple unknown yo, cause I'm crazy enough to lyrically kill u at ur own show, Yo I'm on a killin' spree and u gon' be first, cause I'm crazier then a homophobic at a gay pride march wearin' an eminem T-shirt

fuck frozen meat, u ain't gansta u just posing street, u wannabe tight, u faker then then Michel Jackson trin' to be white, the only pussy this guy seen in his life was his own, cause' he's a fucking transexual bitch yo, u think u hot u think u sick, but dawg u just lost this battle to a chick, so step back before I bust a shot, u think ya dope but it's just a thought
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 9th, '06, 06:55

good stuff,mentioned eminem a lil too much for me.But i dont know if thats a bad thing LOL :unsure: .Anways flow was hot and was a extremely good read.Infact was one of the few in this section i took time out to read twice :worship: ,takes alot to make me do stuff,im lazy LMAO. :) :flower:
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Postby 4D » Mar 9th, '06, 11:40

Everything So real said, very good rhyme, tight!! :8)
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Postby Inzanity » Mar 9th, '06, 13:24

thanks 4 the feed back
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