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I... by ilovebender.com

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 10th, '10, 21:49

I
Still write
What
I like
Write
What's poppin'
What's on in
My
Mind
I
Still write
Whatever
The fuck
I like
Right
I'm from South London from Westminster to the back streets of Thornton Heath.
Off Brigstock Road.

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Re: I... by ilovebender.com

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 11th, '10, 16:11

link of feedback?
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so much WIN!
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Re: I... by ilovebender.com

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 11th, '10, 17:45

feed back, por favor.
I'm from South London from Westminster to the back streets of Thornton Heath.
Off Brigstock Road.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQvteoFiMlg
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Re: I... by ilovebender.com

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 11th, '10, 18:00

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I'm from South London from Westminster to the back streets of Thornton Heath.
Off Brigstock Road.

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Guess_Who wrote:ilovebender makes me want to listen guns'n roses but ...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQvteoFiMlg
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Re: I... by ilovebender.com

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 11th, '10, 19:11

Miss'08 wrote:Maybe you should have dropped the "Right" in the end. :happy:


So it flows like this?

I
Still write
What
I like
Write
What's poppin'
What's on in
My
Mind
I
Still write
Whatever
The fuck
I like

... could work, I'm not mad at that suggestion.
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Off Brigstock Road.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQvteoFiMlg
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Re: I... by ilovebender.com

Postby Just Silver » Oct 13th, '10, 00:25

this seemed like you didn't really plan anything out
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