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Unexplained

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Unexplained

Postby Balance » Mar 9th, '06, 20:04

First time I felt love with which they’re being spoken
Mimic movements of the hand and the eyes wide open
First time realized beauty of words if you look and listen
Imagining and feeling to the bone what a writer has written
Inspired as a child to find the way to make you feel it too
When you sick and tired of the shit that you are going thru
And it came as Godsend angel in the shape of the mic
How about I take you for subliminally imaginative hike
Explain something pleasant with brain tickling words
Clumsy caterpillar in beautiful butterfly it transforms
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Postby Inzanity » Mar 10th, '06, 00:23

wow that was really good nice jod I really liked that one
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Postby Balance » Mar 10th, '06, 13:21

Thnx man :) Good to hear that some of my lyrics are good :worship:
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Re: Unexplained

Postby Balance » Mar 14th, '06, 13:27

memyselforwho wrote:
Balance wrote:First time I felt love with which they
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